when I fall

I'm tired of singing 'Kol Nidre', 

I'm tired if being betrayed,

by myself

I will to walk with Abel,

the still breathing spirit

yet the rejected one keeps on pulling me,

into selfish and murderous destruction,

to spite self and the god pleasing brother.

who shall I walk with when they pull me back and forth?

I shall try my best hold on to Abel,

to take a step towards paradise,

a step away from hell.

but what shall I do when the spiteful one overcomes us with his murderous rage?

I will look forward to the morning for my loving savior to break the fast

and I will be whole again,

and I will grow stronger,

because I fall

Reviews

[Quill]

indeed the recovery process which strengthens us through time is only achieved after failing, nice work.

[audacicity]

never been able to ut the idea of constructive failure so concisely. thank you for the review :)