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Of all the topics I scribble down with pen, 

Your name reappears, again and again.

The spelling familiar, the sensation immense,

Your name is a blessing, but however tense

With emotions buried beneath the surface,

Your name races my heart, but my mind it curses.

-A

Reviews

[Julia.Moore]

A love for haiku poetry began in college, inspired by its simplicity and depth. The book Blue Harlequin captures these moments beautifully. Read the full article to explore the essence of haiku poetry: https://aoidemagazine.com/what-is-haiku-poetry/

[Chris]

We don't seem to choose whom we Love - just whom we like.

[Ajla]

I love this, flows well, and sweet. A new favorite.

[Avia]

Constantly having someone or something at the back of your mind. Well written and I like the rhyme. Nice work.

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

I love how the sentences are structured, they flow really well.

[Najam Us Saher]

Heart touching. I can relate to the lines your name reappears again and again, your name is a blessing.

[audacious]

Thank you!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

I want to ask you, what's with the title? I didn't understand why those numbers?

[Kiwi.jh]

Wow this is really amazing. Talk about truth! This is a really great poem, your word choice was amazing and the flow is perfect. What im a little confused about however is the title...

[audacious]

Quite a few people are it was my clever way of not writing the inspirations name without using letters haha

[audacious]

But thank you so much for the feedback, i really appreciate that!

[Davidgeo]

Strong opening, not so strong closing.

It's good though. You have good focus. I usually ramble off topic. There seems to be an understanding of rhyming and brevity here. Meow.

[audacious]

thanks you lots!

[emipoemi]

I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

[audacious]

Thank you so much :)