What Will Tomorrow Bring?

Being scared doesn't even begin to describe what I’m feeling tonight, because tomorrow is the day that will determine my life from here on out. While I can look at this experience as another one of my magnificent adventures, I’m not sure that I want to.  I’m horrified of the judgments that may come along with this passage. I have to confess that I have, like many, taken judgment upon those in a similar situation. How did I have the audacity to judge one’s life when I didn't know the smallest detail about them? What will it be? Will tomorrow leave my life as it found it or will it change it in a way that may only bring sadness? While I know my interior will never change, I will always see the brighter side of a situation and the possibilities it may hold. My exterior, on the other hand, will never be the same, and I’m not sure that I’m ready for it. Petrified, I’m petrified of what the results may be, whether it’s something old or something new. 

Reviews

[xhannyx]

I really really enjoyed this!!! I thought it was creative and artistic and beautiful! It was truly written beautifully. I believe not all writing should make sense. It should have a message within the lines sitting and waiting for the reader to figure out what it is. A passage like this that needs to be analyzed is creative and I love it

[Samuel Dave]

I loved the part about the interior staying the same. I've always fond of being innocent as a child. Quite couldn't relate to the part about the exterior. For me they are not mutually exclusive. :)

[Brendan McCallum]

Not a poem in my opinion, too lazy at best, it is not what you want others to see or think but for you to tell or show, I too am not sure what is going on here......... Bren.

ps. the whole mystery of life is not knowing what tomorrow will bring, it is not yours till you see the new sun of the day.

[_Oblivion_]

I appreciate your feedback and I have considered and reconsidered everything you've said. I wrote this not as a poem but as an inner thought. It wasn't meant to be completely clear because the narrator wasn't sure how they felt/feel about the situation.The mystery of tomorrow in this case is not meant to be a fun adventure it's determining the narrators future. However, I understand where you're coming from and I appreciate every bit of your advice.

[SamAyel]

Not sure I know what is going on in this, though the technical part isn't bad. Maybe the narrator is considering killing somebody? Might need more context, longer with more things I can see, touch, smell, taste, hear, etc. A little too abstract just by itself.

[_Oblivion_]

It was meant to be broad, I wanted each person to interpret it differently. I was curious to see what everyones conclusion on her situation would be. I do, however, agree that it could have used a little more detail. I appreciate your comment! :)