Tender Ribbon

Tender Ribbon

A Poem by Amanda Trerotola

Tragedy.
Cutting the very ribbon
Delicately tethering a family together
Like a gift
Nothing worth wrapping
Worth saving
Cut, fold, loop, repeat.
Goodbye. 
A gift never meant for delivery. 

© 2019 Amanda Trerotola


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So very well written and beautiful, enjoyed this

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very well written piece of poetry. Well Done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


So beautifully written and tugs this reader’s sentimental heart...

Posted 5 Years Ago


The spare nature of this one leaves much to the imagination. That does not mean feeling is not communicated, however. It sounds as though a death,possibly a sudden one, altered a close knit family forever. ''Cut, fold, loop, repeat./ Goodbye.'' Much pain, much grief, is contained in those terse lines. A very moving work.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on April 11, 2019
Last Updated on April 11, 2019
Tags: poem, family, life, journey

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Amanda Trerotola
Amanda Trerotola

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Welcome to my page, my name is Amanda. I always had a joy for writing, but stopped for many years until I stumbled across my old poems. Figured, I would start writing again. My dream is to write a.. more..

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