ahhhhhhhhhhh very senryu-like in effect ... love the minimalism ...the imaging ... all my senses are titillated ..glad i stopped by ... i saw you commented on a page i was reading and thought ... hmmmmm i haven't seen Amanda yet ... so thought i would stop and read a bit ... this one compels me to read more ..glad you have started up writing again and i wish you good fortune on your book project
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A perfectly painted warn spot on my imagination. These are the best moments, the ones where silence is involved and the fire allows us to look inside. Great piece!!!
It really is ironic and adapt, how an open fire can have a calming effect on your spirit and soul. And makes you feel better, just by its heat, comfort and the reassurance it's their giving you warmth. Like you said the little things do help.
Natural welcoming warmth and sounds interrupted the silence, brings calmness to the spirit - adequately encapsulated in your sweet write - well done! :-)
This to me sounds like the comfort of falling asleep in front of a fire, coccooned in its physical and mental warmth, lulled yo sleep by the soft crackles and hypnotized into a long awaited sleep.
I would say more, but i've got a fire to build :)
Love it.
Welcome to my page, my name is Amanda.
I always had a joy for writing, but stopped for many years until I stumbled across my old poems. Figured, I would start writing again. My dream is to write a.. more..