Amongst the Silence

Amongst the Silence

A Poem by Amanda Trerotola

The crackling of the fireplace
snaps in my ears
as the fiery blaze
thaws my skin 
cradling my worries, 
at last
everything
goes
silent.

It is the small things- a.t. 

© 2019 Amanda Trerotola


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Amanda Trerotola
Any suggestions are appreciated! :)

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This is so very beautiful, enjoyed this write

Posted 5 Years Ago


Thank you for coming out of 'the silence' and back into the light - sharing your lovely pieces. Write on!

Posted 5 Years Ago


ahhhhhhhhhhh very senryu-like in effect ... love the minimalism ...the imaging ... all my senses are titillated ..glad i stopped by ... i saw you commented on a page i was reading and thought ... hmmmmm i haven't seen Amanda yet ... so thought i would stop and read a bit ... this one compels me to read more ..glad you have started up writing again and i wish you good fortune on your book project
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Posted 5 Years Ago


A perfectly painted warn spot on my imagination. These are the best moments, the ones where silence is involved and the fire allows us to look inside. Great piece!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


It really is ironic and adapt, how an open fire can have a calming effect on your spirit and soul. And makes you feel better, just by its heat, comfort and the reassurance it's their giving you warmth. Like you said the little things do help.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Natural welcoming warmth and sounds interrupted the silence, brings calmness to the spirit - adequately encapsulated in your sweet write - well done! :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


The word tickles seems to mean provoking laughter. To dance means movement. Crackling relates to sound.

taps/smacks/raps/beats

The crackling of the fireplace
snaps in my ear
as the fiery blaze
thaws my skin
cradling my worries,
at last
everything
goes
silent.

I think the message is clear despite any suggestions. The soothing sounds help one relax.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Amanda Trerotola

5 Years Ago

Yes, I like these suggestions!
A picturesque writing, reader can visualize through lines, beautifully done poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


The poem paints a beautiful, soothing picture, almost a scene fit for meditation. Contemplating it could indeed put one firmly in the present moment.

Posted 5 Years Ago


This to me sounds like the comfort of falling asleep in front of a fire, coccooned in its physical and mental warmth, lulled yo sleep by the soft crackles and hypnotized into a long awaited sleep.
I would say more, but i've got a fire to build :)
Love it.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2018
Last Updated on January 14, 2019
Tags: poem, poetry, poet, anxiety, fall

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Amanda Trerotola
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Welcome to my page, my name is Amanda. I always had a joy for writing, but stopped for many years until I stumbled across my old poems. Figured, I would start writing again. My dream is to write a.. more..

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