For you, I would

For you,

i would stay up 

until the sun kisses 

the fiery horizon

and the moon embraces

the stars, 

melting the midnight 

sky.

-a.t 

Reviews

[A.G.]

Simple and lovely 💛
Just by your words you can imagine how much that person loves the other. I really liked it. Thank you for sharing your heart with us 😊
-Angelina 🖤

[Alexandra]

I love the simpleness of tis piece. The message is powerful. I love your form of writing.

[Earl Smith]

Powerful and short. Great sentiments. It reminds me of what I tell my Daughter all the time.
"For you I would do the impossible, twice over"

[Ghost writer]

I like the simple beauty to this poem, and I like that you kept it short and didn't drag it out

[Tamara Beryl Latham]

What beautiful words you've written than touch the readers' hearts. Nice imagery. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words. Amazing poetry for love. Thank you Amanda for sharing the excellent poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Lorry]

Ah, for that person, we would indeed melt the midnight sky... If only we could, they would see how much they mean to us. Well, if they ain't impressed with melting the sky, then maybe they don't deserve you :)
Very nicely captured.

[wordman]

sweet sentiment,for you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Jordan Smith]

I really enjoyed this poem. Minimum words, maximum feeling. You did a great job of explaining without extending the poem. I really enjoyed this poem. I look forward to your future writing.

[goldenscar__]

For you,
I would walk the earth
one time
thirteen times
six hundred time
and never be
tired

I liked your poem, it made me fall deeper in love.

[Amanda Trerotola]

Are you saying I should add that? It is weird I was thinking something along those lines.
read moreAre you saying I should add that? It is weird I was thinking something along those lines.

I am touched to hear my words made you fall deeper in love.