Clean

       Destruction 

                         poured

                                 in her garden of scars 

    -a.t

Author's Note

Not sure where to go with this kind of just a random thought.

Reviews

[Bare Trees]

Seems to me destruction and garden clash together. Thunder might be better suited...unless you changed echoed to pour. As in
Destruction poured in her garden of scars.

Just random thoughts. I still get your point though and it's sad.

100/100

[Amanda Trerotola]

Those are good suggestions to consider! Pour would work better. Thank you for reading. :)

[Onlyme]

Ohh..... this really teases you and make you think. Nicely done.

[Amanda Trerotola]

Thank you! This was just a random thought I had. I am unsure whether to expand or not.

[Onlyme]

Follow your heart Amanda on this one.