98% Given

Calmness in the Silence 

Still ignorance with self control, broken and discarded 

Hoped empty scares in built confidence 

Follow this strict self established false lies

Led to the known outcomes defeated 

the aged  bricked felt past of failure left in ash  

Staring into the hurt with blindness in the lies  

loved into this hope

The Dreamt dark and heavy open hearted vulnerability 

Always among life in misery

Why would hope be different 

Misery is truth to shine in shades 

shine

oh shine, shine  

dusted, morned, unrecognizable self i view back in this mirror 

allow my heart to be broken

failure is certain remembering i lied forgetting to love 

My surrendered heart 

surrendered in sacrificed self 

to give a damn, give a soul, a fair shot

A dim lit light still burns

Dim lit still burns 

Broken to this mourning emptiness 

 

Reviews

[Lucille Illuminated]

I read this in your voice! this is good!! I still think you should perform at open mics js 🤷🏾‍♀️ anyway keep doing you.

[Atominizer]

Appreciate your support. I would never perform or read anything I write. Would never be comfortable having eyes looking, hearing, judging or the observed body language. My mind would be of noise, uncomfortable, and never be able to read the writing as intended. Life in the shadows of nothingness, unknown, irrelevant, dark emptiness of my life can and only be comfort. Humans are cruel, Hateful creatures that have abilities to destroy or honor for personal gain.

[Lucille Illuminated]

Fair enough, just know people would enjoy it. Ya have a good voice. There will always be hateful people but there are always grateful people too. Definitely understand being uncomfortable though. People are onions including myself big time. Growing is not for everyone and that’s okay too.