gemini moon

warm lilac water,

dew kissing the tips of blades of grass

i wrapped my arms around her warm body and breathed in

the soft light of the sun

she will reveal me soon enough,

but for now i am standing where the mist hangs low

among the willow trees

warm lilac water,

dew kissing the tips of blades of grass

why did you come down here?

for you, for you, for you

Reviews

[NormaZ]

So beautiful! Soft and sensual. Nice job!

[nadia dmitri]

This is so beautiful! It is delicate but entrancing almost. I can imagine this beautiful wlw nature scene that smells like lilac thanks to your imagery. Amazing job :))

[jaye river]

thank you! that is what i was going for, i'm glad you enjoyed :)

[Chris Shaw]

The repetition works well here, the imagery is beautiful. I am liking your Gemini moon for it’s uplifting feel. I have a wonderful picture in my mind of this scenario.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

Beautifully expressed with the feel of one of the classics! Welcome to the Cafe. ~Sharon

[jaye river]

thank you for reading, sharon!