My flame Of Inspiration

a dedication to of my favorite writers over here in WC whose writings have always inspired me .

My Flame of Inspiration.

                         -A POEM DEDICATED TO THEM

          

Kindling words elegant flame

You give thoughts an impeccable image.

 

Caress of each drop of sentiments

 You lay it down through Aphrodite’s pen.

 

You paint myriad strokes of life

Their flamboyancy reviving our mind inside.

 

You embellish verses with divinity

Carve them with peculiar serenity

 

Words residing seraph in them

Their shine outstanding diamonds and gems.

 

You’re an artist , a wordsmith so bright

Thank you for you spell-bounding writes.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

it's a dedication to two writers:
Sami Khalil and Craig Froman, whose poems have always inspired me in one way or the other. i love their diction and their style and honestly their write always makes me more and more amazed when i read them again and again. they are very encouraging.

thank you for sharing your write with us.

Reviews

[Lexi Villanueva]

Beauty, enthusiasm and wisdom is hidden within this piece. Brightness and lovely words that
fit perfectly and flow nice and sweetly like a elegant poem like this should be. It brings
warmth to the reader and love that warms the soul. I must say I love this exquisite piece you
have created. 100 is my rating.

[The dark story]

Wow…I love d your perception at things. Thank you so much for buying time and reading it. Glad you liked it.

[Ren Black]

This has a very traditional style and is very well written.

[The dark story]

Thank you so much for reading it.

[Prritiy]

very nice composition

best wishes

[The dark story]

thanks a lot. Same to you.:)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome

[fwvalidus]

Good writing and very strong language use. I like how the poem flows from verse to verse as well. Thanks for a good read, I hope you can find the same in some of my works!

[Leona Cieri]

Great use and choice of words; they added such beauty and description into the poem~ I loved it. ^^
It definitely describes how you feel, are inspired, by these two writers, very thoughtful in itself and the intention. Well done~ :)

[The dark story]

Thanks for the uplifting review.

[dw817]

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This is really lovely, Atiba. I liked imagining what Aphrodite's Pen would look like. I could definitely see the pretty and glittering picture in this. :)

[The dark story]

Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it.:)

[dw817]

Sometimes we can't be as bright as the sun, but we can all sparkle like a star in the sky - even if just a little. :)

[TL Boehm]

You embellish verses with divinity
Carve them with peculiar serenity

I know both of these writers - they are everything you say. What a great tribute to them

[Jack Buckner]

I love this! They are both amazing writers!

[The dark story]

yeah ofcourse they are. thanks.

[Cody Williams]

A really great tribute! Both are great writers! Great write! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Anand Sehgal]

A great tribute . A fabulous write. Craig and Sami must be elated :)

[The dark story]

thanks. umm...i guess they are.