Shrinking Humanity

When the humanity shrinks,

the soul is crushed.

It is loathed in blood....

the blood of the Devil.

His eyes lies in the frost

Gazing at the mirrors of the flame of pain

His soul has abandoned him.

so he is swallowing others to grim.

This elite kingdom is shattered

The noble King is dead..

the eulogies of Angels have vanished.

all there remains....is the song of the Fiend!!

the fragrance of innocence is now...stinking

and the hearts of millions are now.burning!!!

All there remains are ashes and hatred....

Answer me.O People!

is there any humanity left???

Author's Note

i wrote this when i was feeling really very disgusted after reading and listening all the devastating news.i think probably there is no news now-a-days which doesn't contains "death"......it's really sad.....

Reviews

[dw817]

O K A Y - definitely not one of my favored subjects (seeing the picture) - As for the question - yes - yes I believe there is humanity left in us. If you look to charities and volunteer functions, people from all over the world are still reaching out a hand to help others.

For instance, I volunteered for 12-years at a remote church food bank despite having no religious connections of my own. Everything went well and no-one cared that I was agnostic (or atheist) since I treated every person with dignity and respect there.

The preacher currently serving knew of my views and that I fully believed religion was a personal and individual thing - but he always treated me with kindness and acceptance - because I wanted to help people.

Eventually this nice preacher as I described him, "Quiet, Passionate, and Senior" retired and was replaced by another, "Loud, Young, and Arrogant" and he 'culled' through the list of volunteers that were not Christian, and my name came up - and he point blank asked me directly as I was filling a box - loud enough so everyone in the room could hear it, "Do you accept Jesus Christ as your Lord and savior ?"

I responded as I think any logical person would. "I have yet to be asked by Him and I think that is His affair, not yours."

so - he promptly dismissed me. Reminded me very much of Joan of Arc. Hmm ...

While not all situations in life are good you should never brood solely on the bad of humanity, there are so many good things in the world. Perhaps that's why God gave us two-eyes, so even if one eye is focused on the bad, the other one can ever and always be focused on the good.

Always look for the good in humanity, and if you can't find it, =MAKE= it yourself so others can see it within you. :)

[The dark story]

oh wow that was so rightly said:
"Perhaps that's why God gave us two-eyes, so even if one eye is focused on the bad, the other one can ever and always be focused on the good."
yet i'm not saying that humanity is vanished, but has quite degraded than it was like before(the title says that). and you're absolutely right that we must make it a better place by ourselves rather than blaming others. as i know that if humanity would have vanished, our existence would have been quite impossible! thanks a lot for this lovey and thought provoking review! thanks again!

[dw817]

Well - you just gotta be in your home, front door locked (and barred, I use a special diagonal metal brace), after 6pm. Even zombies can't get in ! :D

But yes, blame serves really no purpose. I come across something wrong I sigh and say, well, let's just get it done and it'll be lots better when it is - and that's how I go through life.

You're very welcome for the review ! Here's hoping more uplifting and happy articles in the future ! :7

[tanmay7551]

So true! Humanity is shrinking. Long before there was trust among humans, love, emotions... Now all is falling apart.

Good to bring this up to notice!

[Darkswing]

That was excellent. I really a m intrigued on how you drafted these sentences which were related to a difficult time. Good job!!

[Cassie]

You write so beautifully, your choice of words is so excellent, no one would not love your work, keep going, you are a great writer.

[Renée]

Sounds like the end of days... Extremely well written btw at least in my untrained eye..
My heart goes out to the war torn countries.. I have no words of wisdom, no money nor hands that can stop the hell that is upon them right now...I pray for the world and what I can control..is how I interact with others as I go about my day..which includes the internet..
Yes Luv...humanity still exists and those places & their people that feel as if it has left...will rise from this destruction..stronger...it is what we humans do...rise ..

[The dark story]

neither do i possess such things which could just change the world into a tranquil harmony...pray is what i can do as well..that's so true..."humanity still exists and those places & their people that feel as if it has left...will rise from this destruction..stronger...it is what we humans do...rise .."...thanks for this lovely review. thanks a lot!

[Renée]

♥

[Leslie Philibert]

and your anger is indeed right,we seem not to like ourselves...a good write.

[The dark story]

thanks

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, what's happening in our world today is so disgusting. Death...crimes...anytime and everywhere. We often ask ourselves if we can do something to change it.
But we cannot hold the world in our hands. When we dream to change the world, we have to start it from ourselves.
Faith will surely help us. If only everyone thinks like this...

Good write...a reflection of what world we have now. Thanks for sharing this.

[The dark story]

You are absolutely true…that we should stary it from ourselves and than go for the world…and faith is something so strong which keeps us bind to optimism…and thanks a tonne for this review

[Rhianne Ney]

The essence of the poem is well expressed. That's right humanity is quite gone by now. There are people who only care about themselves and leave the others out, as if there will never be anything which they can do to change that. This is a great eye opener. Great work(:

*gomen ne, I'll only be able to review one for now, I'm really inactive this days (:

[The dark story]

oh yeah that's right..there are vry few people left which are humans in the reaL SENSE..THANKS for your wonderful review...and it's not a problem for me..i repeat it again..whenevr you are free!!

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

very true ..
no one cares for others now..
a good topic to write on :)

[The dark story]

thnaks alot for the review but better don't say "no one"..there ARE some people who still have the golden heart of solicitude!!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

I think they r one in millions.. I dont know anyone who has golden heart..

[The dark story]

Oh mine!!that sounds so bad…but I do…and this is one of the reasons why I consider my existence fateful…to be around such people…if you will look at the world with keen pessimism…you will get thesame feeling back…be optimistic some time my freind…it do help:)

[uzair zahid]

nice work...its a nice emotional poem..!!!!

[The dark story]

thanks for the review!!