Chase your desire...

 

Why do you let fear grip you

Like a hungry python?

Why do you let hesitation seize you

Like a chasing storm

 

Why do you fear to stand

In spite of having two legs?

Why do you think to abnegate

In spite of being adept?

 

Why do you let it slip from your brain

That sacrifice will help you gain

Each price of your pain.

 

Feel your blood.

They are still flowing through your veins…

Listen to your heart beat,

It is still knocking at your ribs….

 

Then why can’t you break this bondage?

Why don’t you show your courage?

 

Run, run…..and chase your desire

Make your will as strong as a fire..

 

So bleed, bleed.

But never weep.

And never dare to forfeit….

 

So try, try

Until you reach your sky.

But never dare to cry..

Spread your hope .

Take up a flight

Engulf the ocean of fear…

And you’ll see your destination is so near…..

 

Author's Note

i know it's not good...but i just wrote it.any amendment in it is welcome

Reviews

[tanmay7551]

Well written.

Run, run…..and chase your desire
Make your will as strong as a fire..

Everyone can have a desire of their own but only few are able to convert it into reality through sheer will power and hard work.

[Darkswing]

That's a beautiful poem. It's best as it is.

[The dark story]

Thanks for that :)

[Darkswing]

A pleasure

[Adam Adams]

very inspirational work here!
liked these give lines:

"Run, run…..and chase your desire
Make your will as strong as a fire.."

intriguingly penned. enjoyed readin' the premier of your words . in today's so disgust world, we're all being distressed -- kinda lack of motivation. so i guess, here your poetry works like.. as a stimulus to "boost-up" inspiration... ev'n the choice of title's way aspirationally uplifting as well. good job!

[The dark story]

Oh man! I penned long looooong ago...didn't feel it isn't that good but glad that it boosted up ur will hahahahahaha

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I like the reasons and strength of words.
"So bleed, bleed.
But never weep.
And never dare to forfeit…."
If something is too easy. Maybe we are destine for more. Bleeding for dreams make them worthwhile. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

"Feel your blood.

They are still flowing through your veins…

Listen to your heart beat,

It is still knocking at your ribs…."

Wow. I just saw this write. An amazing one...:)



Then why can’t you break this bondage?

Why don’t you show your courage?

[The dark story]

Thank you for the lovely review!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Cassie]

Thank you for the advise, you have managed to put this clear in the poem. Loved it.

[The dark story]

Thanks a lot Cassie! Always glad to hear from you!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

never give up .. told in the form a chaotic poem :)

[The dark story]

thnaks for your kind review!!!.my oh my...you actually reviewed all my poems!!!...thanks a tonne!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe!! i keep my word

[The dark story]

Heheheh…that's y I trust u:-D

[Muhammad Qasim]

oh thanksss :)

[The dark story]

saying thanks just for trusting you...bdh:P:

[Muhammad Qasim]

toohhh!! :pp p**** :)

[The dark story]

pagal tro mein huun hi hain isme badi baat kya hai as if tum bade normal ho:P :P

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe... speechless ....... :p

[RachelReaper]

this was very uplifting for me to read! Just hearing it makes me want to get up and do something with my life! Thank you for posting this, I enjoyed reading this a lot!

[The dark story]

Thanks for ur compliment …glad you liked it

[RachelReaper]

:)

[WingsToFly]

It is very good. Well done :-)

[The dark story]

thanksa lot