Ch5. One More Chance

Ch5. One More Chance

A Chapter by Athena Ramos

            "You let her escape?!" the sentence echoed through the castle walls escaping the throne room.

            The throne room was lit with one thousand five hundred and seven candles including the ones that made three whole chandeliers to brighten the throne room at night. Amber flares from the candle really complimented the 48 feet tall bisque drapes that was selected by the queen. At the end of the room was a huge shield hanged on the wall with a creast of a fox on top of a shield and a sword beside it, and below the fox is another fox near the shield and sword. And there below the shield are two gold thrones.

            There, on the right throne sat a man with short taupe gray hair and blue eyes. The queen who usually sat on his left was not present. So there he sat alone with a queue of guards, and between the guards there was a man kneeling.

            "Forgive me your highness." answered the man with green eyes.

            King Shairro stood from his throne and walk towards the kneeling man in front of him who's lowering his head down, eyes starring at the man. The man didn't move a muscle. He knew very well never to rise till the king ordered, and never to speak unless spoken to. As King Shairro got closer to him, his heart beat got faster and faster. King Shairro was known for ruthlessly killing his men whenever they can't deliver. And he knew he had failed him.

            The king, on his finest emerald velvet suit, walked in circles around the man in silence. After several turns, he stopped in front of the man, gave a sigh and drew a heavy fine engraved sword. "Answer me." he commanded. "How did she escape?" he then pointed the sword to the man's throat.

            "She used witchcraft my lord." answered that man, taking a big gulp as the cold blade touched his adam's apple.

            "If she was able to do witchcraft, then why hasn't she vanished herself when you locked her up?"

            "I don't know my lord." a drop of sweat ran through his eyebrow.

            "A stupid answer like that will get yourself killed easily Luq."

            Luq was silent.

            "One more chance." the king said. "I'll give you one more chance. Look for her. Kill her. And get my ring back! Understood?"

            "Yes my lord."

            "Good." hissed King Shairro as he lowered his sword. "Now leave!"

            And with the wave of King Shairro's hand suggesting Luq to leave, he stood up and left the throne room and sought for Angel.


© 2011 Athena Ramos


Author's Note

Athena Ramos
This is where we find out about the man at the first chapter who was chasing the girl :P
if you find any mistakes, please point it out :)

i'm so sorry i just got back. thing were messy at school. and it eventually followed me home T__T

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"You let her escape?!" the sentence echoed through the castle walls escaping the throne room.

The throne room was lit with one thousand five hundred and seven candles including the ones that made three whole chandeliers to brighten the throne room at night. Amber flares from the candle really complimented the 48 feet tall bisque drapes that was selected by the queen. At the end of the room was a huge shield hanged on the wall with a creast of a fox on top of a shield and a sword beside it, and below the fox is another fox near the shield and sword. And there below the shield are two gold thrones.


"You let her escape?!" the sentence echoed through the castle walls, escaping the throne room.

The throne room was lit with one thousand five hundred and seven candles, including the ones that made it possible for three entire chandeliers to brighten the throne room at night. The amber flares from the candles truly complimented the forty-eight feet tall bisque drapes that were selected by the queen. --- At the end of the room was a huge shield hanged on the wall with a crest of a fox on top of a shield and a sword beside it, and below the fox is another fox near the shield and sword. Below the shield sat two golden thrones. ---

I couldn't make any sense of the last part other than that the shield was above the two thrones.

Posted 13 Years Ago


a ruthless king, classic, hope angel is ok, keep up the good work btw i think it's get my ring back instead of give my ring back

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well this chapter seems interesting. Just can't wait to see what you bring on the table with your next chapter. Good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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I'm a person. A simple person who goes by the name Athena Ramos. I'm a person who dreams a lot and some says that it's just a waste of time. But I can't help it! If i don't dream in my sleep, .. more..

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