The World Between

Thoughts

THE WORLD BETWEEN

Sometimes I fall into a dream like sleep,

But not asleep with a dream unseen.

Then a sudden trip back to reality,

And where I went stays a mystery.

Author's Note

Please do feel free to leave your thoughts and reviews. :)

Reviews

[Helen]

I love that place - nearly awake, nearly living the dream, drifting in and out of consciousness. Always feels really sad to have to come to and be back in reality

[Najam Us Saher]

That's so true. I liked it.

[Tiffany K Charles]

Simply wonderful..... Many mysteries i've gone to in my dreams..... And most I never want to leave

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
I loved it!
Keep on writing!!

[zunie frost]

love it !!!
great job.
nicely done

[Aswin R Prasad]

thanks zunie.

[zunie frost]

Welcome !!!

[andrew mitchell]

How dreams play the mind. A good write

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you. :)

[Warrior]

Very awesome read. I like how your writing flows together, to make me visualize everything that's going on. Many stories on here do that, and that's why most of the stories I read on here are good because you all are very talented and gifted, I visualized everything as I was reading it. Great writing. On to another topic. I have a website where I post my short stories, and blogs on. I also have ads on the website. I was wondering if you can go to my website, and click on any ad. you don't have to buy anything, I promise you won't get any viruses, all it is is google adsense on my website, and the more clicks on the ads, the more it helps grow my website. My website is bwlawson.com I appreciate it, that you would be taking part in helping my craft, business, product, and brand grow. Thank you!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks for reviewing. :)

[Lucien Maier]

unique piece that uses very few words to potrayed a lot. Good work

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you for the review. :)

[iamshadowine]

this is ineffable! I don't even have words to describe this amazing work! I don't from where do i begin!
absolutely wonderful!
keep writing :D

[Aswin R Prasad]

Hehe. Thank you so much. Really glad that you liked it. :)

[GalaxyGhost]

I like the simplicity of the poem! The last line is also my favorite.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you for your review. Glad that you like it. :)