The Nights

When my mind starts being creative. xD

When my thoughts become clear,

Free without any fear.

The nights when I think ,

The nights I just don't blink.

The nights when I see dreams without sleeping,

The nights I just listen to some music.

Lost in my thoughts,

And there are a lot.

Some that I keep inside , 

some that I try to hide.
Some that I write down, 

some that I forget by dawn!

The nights,

The only time when I know that I'm right.

Author's Note

I'm a night person. :) This is just a simple write.
Just thought about how I draw,write poems and do all those stuff I like at night and this came up. :)

I think most of you can relate to this. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too.
"The nights,
The only time when I know that I'm right."
I like the night. I have more energy. Thank you Aswin for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[zunie frost]

You write at night ? Well I always write at night I just put on my best music and words form . I don't know how but they do .
Your work is really beautiful . I love the rhythm of the poem

[andrew mitchell]

yes i know that feeling of i'll remember that thought or verse in the morning and you don't.

[Emily]

Great poem!!
Keep it up!!

[firabelle]

Cool stuff! Maybe focus on the imagery that is particular to the night that really excites your imagination. So far, this is the biggest issue in your writing. You keep telling us, not putting us in your feet What the readers want to read is something that just ENVELOPES them, and takes them on whatever adventure, (or non-adventure), it is that you are writing about. In short; show, don't tell.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Okay. I would actually like to explain more. But I myself don't actually know what excites my imagination. :) Thank you for your review.

[Ardra]

I would love to write during nite .....but most of my writings are during day time......I would love a nite for myself to do what I want to....that's like a luxury for me hehe so ....you enjoy writing and your nite time

[Aswin R Prasad]

Yes, I do ;) Thank you for your review.

[William Liston]

I'm a night person so I could easily relate to this. Well done.

-William Liston

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you for your review. :)

[𝐋.𝐂.]

Like the way you express the time period, night, through the topic "thoughts".
"When my thoughts become clear,

Free without any fear."
Really like this part, is it because the day have something that makes you afraid to say outloud? ̃o.O

[Aswin R Prasad]

It's not that I'm afraid to express my feelings at day time. 😊
It's just that my creativity is at a whole different level at night time. I don't know if you know what I'm trying to say. ;)
Anyways thanks for your review. Really glad that you like the poem

[𝐋.𝐂.]

Oh... I see
Can you take a look at my poem?

[𝐋.𝐂.]

Well, I not a night person, so how's writing during night like? Quiet?

[Aswin R Prasad]

Yes. Sure. 😊
And writing at night is peaceful . It's like I can write about even the smallest and least important topics. 😃

[𝐋.𝐂.]

Wow...o◡O!
I try to stay up for new year's eve for several times, but I always fall asleep