Lovely little piece of poetry that you have here! Unlike many pieces that have a similar topic range as your's, you don't prattle on and on and ON AND ON. You gave us what we needed to know to make us feel you wanted us to feel- hopefully, flawless. It may be on a topic that is common in poetry and isn't as thought provoking as The Saint and The Sinner, but I still enjoyed reading it and reviewing it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Really glad that you liked it. Thank you so much :)
Kind, gentle and beautiful words expressed.
"You'll be flawless,
Flawless even with your beautiful flaws."
I agree with and I liked the above lines. Thank you Aswin for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Lovely little piece of poetry that you have here! Unlike many pieces that have a similar topic range as your's, you don't prattle on and on and ON AND ON. You gave us what we needed to know to make us feel you wanted us to feel- hopefully, flawless. It may be on a topic that is common in poetry and isn't as thought provoking as The Saint and The Sinner, but I still enjoyed reading it and reviewing it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Really glad that you liked it. Thank you so much :)
I'm 18.
I've been writing poems since for a while now..Most of the poems i write are based on my feelings..
The poems i write are mostly unorthodox and i tend to keep it that way! ;)
Also love t.. more..