Wrong Sense

Wrong Sense

A Poem by Aswin R Prasad
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When people misunderstand you when you be yourself around them..

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When you become so comfortable around someone,
They start misunderstanding you, 
They take things in the wrong sense..
I'm sick of this nonsense .. 
All I was trynna be was a good friend! 
I didn't hesitate for once,
To send you texts a hundred times..
But you just took it in the wrong sense..
So now I limit myself,
So now I try not to make any misunderstandings..
Even though I'm not being myself,
I just wanna avoid all the nonsense! 
I just think that's the better thing to do,
Since you don't even have the slightest bit of clue,
That I was just a best friend, 
Getting angry at little things just like how I used to do..
Now I do hesitate.. 
Thinking, you might take it in the wrong sense! 
I'm so sick of this nonsense!

© 2016 Aswin R Prasad


Author's Note

Aswin R Prasad
Finally when I started being myself around someone with whom I thought I could say or share anything without hesitation,that someone started to take it in a wrong sense :)

All suggestions are welcome.. And please do point out the typo errors :P
And this one has a tricky rhyme scheme i guess :P You'll get it if you read it right :D

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Sad and all too common that we open up and confide in someone, only to feel the atmosphere change. You are the one left feeling bruised, but who has really lost out on a friend? If you cannot be yourself around people who you call friends, then maybe you need new friends.
As you say, when you hesitate, it is impossible to be truly you, so all the friendship gets is a masked veneer. Well written, honest write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) Glad that you liked it .. I do write my feelings and the only time I'm totally .. read more



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This is something I go through on a day to day. It's not easy finding people you can rely on to be yourself with. I know very few in this world. All together a good write. Thanks for the read:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very strong lesson we all learn..... You want to be open but then........ Yes... all too well ...... this ends up happening.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


A sad and a touchy way to describe a misunderstanding !!! To be honest I love the way you make every line rhymes !!!! A great piece of work thank you so much for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like your poem, nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice poem!!
Keep up the great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yes how a positive thought from a positive person can be so misinterpreted by a person locked in negative thoughts and or always wanting that reassurance hence the negativity. Nicely done Aswin

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Sad and all too common that we open up and confide in someone, only to feel the atmosphere change. You are the one left feeling bruised, but who has really lost out on a friend? If you cannot be yourself around people who you call friends, then maybe you need new friends.
As you say, when you hesitate, it is impossible to be truly you, so all the friendship gets is a masked veneer. Well written, honest write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) Glad that you liked it .. I do write my feelings and the only time I'm totally .. read more

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Added on March 15, 2016
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Tags: Wrong Sense, Friendship, Best Friend, Change

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Aswin R Prasad
Aswin R Prasad

Payyanur, Kannur, India



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