Finally when I started being myself around someone with whom I thought I could say or share anything without hesitation,that someone started to take it in a wrong sense :)
All suggestions are welcome.. And please do point out the typo errors :P
And this one has a tricky rhyme scheme i guess :P You'll get it if you read it right :D
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Sad and all too common that we open up and confide in someone, only to feel the atmosphere change. You are the one left feeling bruised, but who has really lost out on a friend? If you cannot be yourself around people who you call friends, then maybe you need new friends.
As you say, when you hesitate, it is impossible to be truly you, so all the friendship gets is a masked veneer. Well written, honest write.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much :) Glad that you liked it .. I do write my feelings and the only time I'm totally .. read moreThank you so much :) Glad that you liked it .. I do write my feelings and the only time I'm totally honest is when I write ;) :P
This is something I go through on a day to day. It's not easy finding people you can rely on to be yourself with. I know very few in this world. All together a good write. Thanks for the read:)
A sad and a touchy way to describe a misunderstanding !!! To be honest I love the way you make every line rhymes !!!! A great piece of work thank you so much for sharing
Yes how a positive thought from a positive person can be so misinterpreted by a person locked in negative thoughts and or always wanting that reassurance hence the negativity. Nicely done Aswin
Sad and all too common that we open up and confide in someone, only to feel the atmosphere change. You are the one left feeling bruised, but who has really lost out on a friend? If you cannot be yourself around people who you call friends, then maybe you need new friends.
As you say, when you hesitate, it is impossible to be truly you, so all the friendship gets is a masked veneer. Well written, honest write.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much :) Glad that you liked it .. I do write my feelings and the only time I'm totally .. read moreThank you so much :) Glad that you liked it .. I do write my feelings and the only time I'm totally honest is when I write ;) :P
I'm 18.
I've been writing poems since for a while now..Most of the poems i write are based on my feelings..
The poems i write are mostly unorthodox and i tend to keep it that way! ;)
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