Fine With Pain

Fine With Pain

A Poem by Aswin R Prasad
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People who hurt themselves !

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On my arm,Put a single line, 
To take my mind off the rage.. 
And now i'm fine..so "fine"
Now my mind's on the pain!

© 2016 Aswin R Prasad


Author's Note

Aswin R Prasad
Something that i wanted to share ! :) All suggestions are welcome..
I know many people could relate to this..And that's exactly what i'm hoping for ! :)

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So short but so powerful!
Keep it up!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


People cut along with a few other assorted addictions for varying reasons. Finding focus to put that energy into your writing will be more beneficial to you. It will also give us, your readers the opportunity to read more of your excellent work. Bleed ink, not blood, Well done. peace be with you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cutting is something many of my friends when I was in elementary and jr high school........ I'm glad you found a very constructive way to put such an issue...... Well put and executed.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


As always your expression is obvious. You grow and you never cease to amaze. One of my favorite writers, period.
As to the length, size doesn't matter. As long add the job gets done. Job done !

Posted 8 Years Ago


All I can say is, you're good in portraying feelings despite of how short your words are. I can totally relate to this.
Great job! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Fine = Freaked out Insecure Neurotic Emotional. I felt the pain in these few word.
Well written and thank you for sharing

L.V.

Posted 8 Years Ago


ouch! that hurts! nibe write ouch!

Posted 8 Years Ago


what a strong message for such few words. this is really great work. thank you for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


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damn..that it hurts...thats so true..u described me lol :D


Posted 8 Years Ago


Honest and direct words and thoughts. Pain does heal and redirect memories. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 6, 2016
Last Updated on February 11, 2016
Tags: Teen, Love, Hurt, Sad, Self harm

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Aswin R Prasad
Aswin R Prasad

Payyanur, Kannur, India



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I'm 18. I've been writing poems since for a while now..Most of the poems i write are based on my feelings.. The poems i write are mostly unorthodox and i tend to keep it that way! ;) Also love t.. more..

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