One Last Time

When you're really tired of fighting with someone,but still nobody lets go just 'cuz you want them in your life real bad!

I'm so sick of fighting,

Now,It's starting to bring me down!

And when i see you 'typing..'

I hope,with a frown,

that you might send your apologies..

But,All I see is more stubborn words,

And we start fighting again!

Both of us, now so sore with pain,

For a while now,

Things have been low,

And 'high' is just another word,

A word that gives us hope!

We both try to cope,

It's like we're tied together with a rope!

Nobody leaves,Maybe,

That's how it's supposed to be..

Sometime,We don't talk for days,

Sometimes,my heartbeats, they rise..

"Miss You",is something i wanna say,

But,my ego,it won't let me say!

At last, you come up to me,

And ask if we could try one last time...

And then,I remember,

The last time when you said the same!

But still I say,"One last time it is"...
Hoping..Still hoping!..
I don't wanna let you go..I really don't!.. 

Author's Note

I had to post this.. Would love to read your reviews and suggestions..
I wrote this today,And what made me write this are all the frequent fights with my best friend! Hope all would turn out better! :)

It's been a busy week! I know i'm really behind on the reviews..Will read all your works this weekend! :) Please do send the read requests so that i don't miss any! :)

Reviews

[TheMalady]

Oh, I thought this was a fight between you and your gf. haha, sorry. However, I like the words here and as well as the story in the poem. It's true that the last words are not always the last and it leaves us frustrated. Though, I must say that both must have understanding and enough faith to each other. Whatever must happen, friendship is more important than pride.

Nothing I could say bad against this. Good job! :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Glad that you liked it! Thank you so much! :)

[TheMalady]

You're very welcome! :)

[SnowCat]

Awesome poem. good emotions with every word thank you for sharing

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you! :)

[Ardra]

Good one :)
you have jotted down your emotions.. don't let the ego come in between a good relation.. :)
hope everything turns out fine ... keep writing

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much.. Glad you liked it! :)

[matpat]

This is really easy to relate with, you are very good at writing, hope you feel better!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you! :)

[KLH]

I feel this on a daily baisis. and now it finaly in words. wow very good. well worded.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you! Glad that you liked it! :)

[Blackheart]

This is actually good. You pour your feelings in a very straight forward manner which I really like. And just like your other writings, this one also has that spark. Beautiful. :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks! Glad you liked it! :)