Past

Past

A Poem by Aswin R Prasad
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Most of us have trouble coming out of our past!

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I ain't anyone,
To tell you not to think about someone..
All i know is,
Past f*cks you up,
And it takes you to a dump,
You feel miserable,
It drags you down..
Take my word,
I swear it won't take you to hell,
If it does too,
It would never be like the hell your in!! 
Like they say,
"Make peace with your past,
So that it doesn't f*ck up your future!"
Memories, I know they last,
But never fall into their nature!
Some people , They stay in your mind,
They make you blind,
Never give in,Never give up..
Live in the present,
Let your attitude do the talking..
"F*ck your past!" ..
Don't let it f*ck you up,
Don't let it break you,
Don't let it make you,
Don't be the weak one,
When your past haunts you..
Stand up strong,
And be who you are,
Be the one who fights back,
Be the one who never breaks,
Be the one who you always wanna be!!
So let your past stay last,
And present be what you lust!

© 2016 Aswin R Prasad


Author's Note

Aswin R Prasad
This is for all of you (including me ;) ) who has trouble getting out of their past life..! :)
Would like to hear what you guys think about it and your suggestions! :)

Played with the words like always and here's what i got ! ;)

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To be frank, I started rapping this verse while nearing the ending. The flow was fast and the best part was it did not seem unnatural. I liked it a lot. And the last line was a bit profound. Keep up the goos work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Glad you liked it! :) thank you so much
This is a beautiful piece my favorite so far, I think you could exchange some of the cussing for other words because it sort of faults up the integrity of the poem, it does very well without them.

It is really good, I hope to here more form you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much
There's this sort of off-beat rhythm to the way you write which matches perfectly with the subject matter. Your poems remind me of a rhythm, or a rap, and I like the emphasizing of the words with bold.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Really appreciate the kind words! :)
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very well written, straight to the point.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
well done...... I'm enjoying your poems very well.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
This is a really great poem. Thank you for sharing I really enjoyed reading this. it has a very powerful message that many can relate to and it gets that message across easily. keep up the good writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Glad that i could express my emotions! :)
Powerful expression of emotions can be seen here. But this is indeed true on many levels. Staying back and pondering over one's past has never done anyone good. It's a waste of time and all it brings is pain and misery.
Well written. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thanks brother! :) Really appreciate your kind words! :)
I see you write very well, in your " rage at the page " mode. I really like it. See you working with critique and soaring past. Getting you angry brings out the best in you potentially. Thought so, I'm impressed even more with your resolve. Thanks brother

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Haha.. Sometimes it works ;) But not always :)
Thanks for your kind words :) Really appreciat.. read more
I don't have major problems with my past. The past is just that, the future has not happened. We must live in the moment because that's where you are. Well done work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Lol.. I guess we reviewed each others poems at the same time ;)
Yeah..True.. But if we want .. read more
Willard Wells

8 Years Ago

Making peace with your past is good, but some individuals have issues that cannot be put to rest and.. read more
Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Haha.. Yeah.. It's different for everyone.. ;)
Powerful, saying enough is enough. Saying no to your past with understanding, passion, and an end goal. We all have things we need to move past, once we do the freedom that comes with it is worth what it took to accomplish that freedom.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) Really glad you liked it! :)

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Added on January 25, 2016
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Tags: Past, Life, Hope, Rhymes, Rhythm, Rap

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Aswin R Prasad
Aswin R Prasad

Payyanur, Kannur, India



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