Past

Most of us have trouble coming out of our past!

I ain't anyone,

To tell you not to think about someone..

All i know is,

Past f*cks you up,

And it takes you to a dump,

You feel miserable,

It drags you down..

Take my word,

I swear it won't take you to hell,

If it does too,

It would never be like the hell your in!! 

Like they say,

"Make peace with your past,

So that it doesn't f*ck up your future!"

Memories, I know they last,

But never fall into their nature!

Some people , They stay in your mind,

They make you blind,

Never give in,Never give up..
Live in the present,

Let your attitude do the talking..
"F*ck your past!" ..
Don't let it f*ck you up,

Don't let it break you,

Don't let it make you,

Don't be the weak one,

When your past haunts you..
Stand up strong,

And be who you are,

Be the one who fights back,

Be the one who never breaks,

Be the one who you always wanna be!!
So let your past stay last,

And present be what you lust!

Author's Note

This is for all of you (including me ;) ) who has trouble getting out of their past life..! :)
Would like to hear what you guys think about it and your suggestions! :)

Played with the words like always and here's what i got ! ;)

Reviews

[vellichor]

I like how you described past in such a unique way. My favorite part to your poem was the "Stand up strong/And be who you are/Be the one who fights back". Keep up the great writing!

[Kristine Stewart]

You will not believe me, but I am personally in a place where your poem, "Past" is something that gives hope... well done!

[Christine Peters]

Not promoting my work but when I read your so angry passionate words, I thought I might add my latest to possibly give you more positive thoughts.

Time does not matter,

The moment does.

The past; good or bad, is all gone.
Nothing that you can change or go back on.
Leaving only memories of one's so far life.

The future promises nothing,
But all hope and dreams.
We have no idea what will seed to deviate it.

The present " the moment right now.,
Decides which way we may turn -
Left or right.
Give up or strike forward
To attempt all impossible goals.,

The moment 'now' suddenly becomes all.
Our past, present and hopefully our future

'Now', is the only one time in our life that we have full control.

Stop and think of this one sheer moment.

It is yours to look back on - when it soon again becomes your past.

Best regards,

Christine Peters (UK)

[Naajia Collins]

loved it very deep i felt the pain in thewords

[UnrestedFaith]

A deep thank you as most of us aren't sure how to get past the past..

[Gee]

Forget all yesterday's and focus on the now,easier said than done.Super poetry Aswin

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"F*ck your past!" ..
Don't let it f*ck you up,
Don't let it break you,
Don't let it make you,
Don't be the weak one,
When your past haunts you.."
The past is just lessons for us to be careful and wiser. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Meeks]

On the other hand, our past makes us who we are. If everyone fvcks their past, everyone will be the same, emotionless and experienceless person. Don't ignore the past, accept it and find your happiness in it.

While I can't agree with the message, I can say you have a very excellent style of writing. Your words a very well connected, flowing smoothly. Interesting, how you bold certain sections for emphasis.
Hope you keep writing!

[gunjan]

I think your words are representing you and your anger,,,,I agree with your poem but I just wanna say you this,,,please leave your anger too in your past or it wont be possible for you to forget your past...not even for any1 else..& apart from this I liked it...thanks for sharing.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Noh.. just 'cuz i used words that expresses anger doesn't mean that there's only anger..
Anyway.. thanks! :)

[Riddhi]

Its really nice poem and i really liked your main idea and i also agree with you that everyone should forget his past...You have expressed your idea in a really nice poem.....I really enjoyed reading it...Keep it up and thanks for sharing....

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you for your time and review.. And i meant if your past makes you weak, try to forget it..
read moreThank you for your time and review.. And i meant if your past makes you weak, try to forget it..
And if it doesn't , no problem! ;)