This is for all of you (including me ;) ) who has trouble getting out of their past life..! :)
Would like to hear what you guys think about it and your suggestions! :)
Played with the words like always and here's what i got ! ;)
My Review
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I like how you described past in such a unique way. My favorite part to your poem was the "Stand up strong/And be who you are/Be the one who fights back". Keep up the great writing!
I agree.
"F*ck your past!" ..
Don't let it f*ck you up,
Don't let it break you,
Don't let it make you,
Don't be the weak one,
When your past haunts you.."
The past is just lessons for us to be careful and wiser. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
On the other hand, our past makes us who we are. If everyone fvcks their past, everyone will be the same, emotionless and experienceless person. Don't ignore the past, accept it and find your happiness in it.
While I can't agree with the message, I can say you have a very excellent style of writing. Your words a very well connected, flowing smoothly. Interesting, how you bold certain sections for emphasis.
Hope you keep writing!
I think your words are representing you and your anger,,,,I agree with your poem but I just wanna say you this,,,please leave your anger too in your past or it wont be possible for you to forget your past...not even for any1 else..& apart from this I liked it...thanks for sharing.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Noh.. just 'cuz i used words that expresses anger doesn't mean that there's only anger..
Anyw.. read moreNoh.. just 'cuz i used words that expresses anger doesn't mean that there's only anger..
Anyway.. thanks! :)
Its really nice poem and i really liked your main idea and i also agree with you that everyone should forget his past...You have expressed your idea in a really nice poem.....I really enjoyed reading it...Keep it up and thanks for sharing....
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your time and review.. And i meant if your past makes you weak, try to forget it.. read moreThank you for your time and review.. And i meant if your past makes you weak, try to forget it..
And if it doesn't , no problem! ;)
I'm 18.
I've been writing poems since for a while now..Most of the poems i write are based on my feelings..
The poems i write are mostly unorthodox and i tend to keep it that way! ;)
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