The Rebel

The teenage where you are against everything ! :)

Be nice,Don't think twice,
Or else I'll rise!
No! Then you can't contain,
You can't sustain,
All you'll get is strain..
A lot more than you wanted,
All this for taking me for granted!
You can try me,
But never lie to me..
I'll do what I want to,
I know there's nothing I can't do!
Stop there! You can't bear,
Another step, and I'll tear,
Your mind, so weak,
Needs a tweak, or else I swear,
It'll break!
So don't take me to an other level,
'Cuz I can be a f*cking rebel!!

Author's Note

It's a short poem i wrote when i was in my class! :)
I think it's something that all the teens can relate to! :) And i'll really be pleased if everybody could understand the intensity of this poem in the same way!

Not one of my best, but still, feel free to leave your reviews and suggestions! :)

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Being a teenager is far from black and white, but the passion of being one is. Choices are black and white, you either intensely feel for something, or intensely don't care. It is a great way to be, but is only one aspect of the whole package of youth. It was awesome, incredible, amazing, terrible, dreadful and soul destroying too. On one hand you have infinite possibilities, but on the other, people see teenagers as another species, which I guess they are, but it's no bad thing. I still have the mind of a teenager, with hopes, ambitions and fears, but unfortunately, the packaging I came in has changed into somewhat disappointing grey. The grey in my hair is the only rebellious streak left visible, but I still feel the furious energy of youth in my mind.
It was a time of wonder and confusion in equal measure. I wouldn't want to go through it again, but what a ride it was.
You capture perfectly the voice of youth, which is a voice too often ignored. Old enough to die for your country, but too young to have a beer legally. Something is wrong with that statement.
Great job on this, kudos.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much! :)

[andrew mitchell]

A fun read, a fast flowing read, a rebel at best> Well Done!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks so much ! :) really appreciate it! :)

[SnowCat]

your welcome

[TheMalady]

Haha, definitely true for being a rebel. Black and white - not just teenagers can be rebels, I think adults can, too if they think something is not going on their own way. Thanks a lot for sharing this one! Great poem. :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Yeah .. true

[Aswin R Prasad]

My apologies.. the network died ! Thanks for your review and time! :)

[TheMalady]

No probs. :)

[Lluvs]

Real fun read (: Definitely enjoyed the ending ha! ♡

[Aswin R Prasad]

Glad that you enjoyed reading it :)