Rage To The Page

Rage To The Page

A Poem by Aswin R Prasad
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Some things...You just gotta write it off.. :)

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I remember when i lost you,
I never wrote,not even a few..
My mind was being crushed from inside,
And I'm not even gonna lie,
I came back home,
turned the music ON and high,
sat there on my bed,
no I would never cry...
Turned the volume so high,
that I can't even listen my mind try,
to think of you,you were just a lie...
"Take that rage,put it on a page,
take the page to the stage,
blow the roof off the place..!"
And the song played on and on and on...
So I took a page,
took my rage,to the page,
And my mind was so engaged !
Relief came to the 'raged' ..
Wrote my mind off on the page,
the things, I've had it rough,
the things I couldn't get off,
From my mind I shut off!
Took the words from my rage,
and with the rage ,raped the page!!
And eased the crave!..
Yeah! I took the rage to the page,
and my mind off the rage!

© 2016 Aswin R Prasad


Author's Note

Aswin R Prasad
And that's how i started writing poems! :)
Really would like to read the reviews for this one..
NOTE: Try raping it ;) Sounds better that way! :)
And i think for people who don't like rhymes and raps.. this read might be a little disappointing.. My apologies.. :)
Also it gets kinda like a tongue twister towards the end! ;)

And Sorry for being ambiguous..
"Take that rage,put it on a page,
take the page to the stage,
blow the roof off the place..!"
These are the lines from the song i was listening then ;)
It's from the song "If you could see me now" by "The script"!
I guess you've heard this song or else you surely need to..It's such an inspiring song and this song inspired me to start writing poems and raps!

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Before I even got to read the author notes I completely heard this as a rap, which I'm too old to be allowed to like. I heard it as a a kind of spat out rage, kind of like lose yourself in eight mile, where the song only got out because of his determination to prove the doubters wrong.
"Turned the volume so high,
that i can't even listen my mind try,
to think of you,you were just a lie..." Have so been there and done that. It is not a teenage thing btw, I still do that.
You wrote your mind off the page and off the rage perfectly here. Kudos.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words and review.. I had a doubt if people would actually take this one in the .. read more



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haha, okay. I really enjoyed this poem. This is just so awesome, btw. Loved how you rhymed rage, page and rape... Nice poem! Keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! Glad you liked it ! :)
TheMalady

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
TheMalady

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
Before I even got to read the author notes I completely heard this as a rap, which I'm too old to be allowed to like. I heard it as a a kind of spat out rage, kind of like lose yourself in eight mile, where the song only got out because of his determination to prove the doubters wrong.
"Turned the volume so high,
that i can't even listen my mind try,
to think of you,you were just a lie..." Have so been there and done that. It is not a teenage thing btw, I still do that.
You wrote your mind off the page and off the rage perfectly here. Kudos.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words and review.. I had a doubt if people would actually take this one in the .. read more
I understand the feeling of how you want express every feeling, but you can't so we search our own ways to let it out and writing is one of the best creative ways makes us relieved and gives us the satisfaction :) good work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Yeah! It sure is.. thank you for your time and review ! :)
Nicely written. Quite relatable with my life too.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much.. glad you could relate to it :)
I really love the rhythm, and I kinda feel identified. Great piece! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Glad that you liked it :)
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Rye
"Take that rage,put it on a page,
take the page to the stage,
blow the roof off the place..!"

Loved this piece, so very nicely written,
could almost be song lyrics, I sensed a rhythm within your words.
Very awesome.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

And those lines are from the song which i was listening then.. :)
"The Script-If you could s.. read more
Rye

8 Years Ago

I've never heard it, but I do like this, really awesome
Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) Really appreciate it :)

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Added on January 22, 2016
Last Updated on July 2, 2016
Tags: Rap, Rage, Love, Sad, Mind, Emotion

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Aswin R Prasad
Aswin R Prasad

Payyanur, Kannur, India



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