The Day I Cried

Sometimes you love some people more than they deserve..And they hurt you more than you deserve!

I don't know why,

But i just did...
And now i say it with a sigh,

Look what you did!
Maybe, It's 'cuz ..
I cared,bore,

every single tear,

my heart now aware,

of what life truly is,

of the life that i miss...
Yeah! I miss,

Miss being happy,

crappy,with you,

but all that you blew!
And now, I think of this day,

As the day that you died,

and the day that i cried! 

Every drop of tear,

from my eyes,now so dim,

to tell a story to hear,

of our fights to the brim!

Maybe it's 'cuz,

I suffocated,complicated,

what was already isolated,

and my heart is now devastated,

thinking of what life truly is,

may the future be a bliss..!
Yeah! I'm talking,

talking about you being for you 

and me being for me,

And now i think of this day,

As the day that you died,

and the day that i cried !!

Author's Note

I love playing with words..And when they mix with the strong emotions and sorrows,you really get into the mood to write something that just wants to be expressed :)

Reviews

[armin]

I can feel the sorrow reading your touching words.
And i loved the rhyming.

Armin. ...

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much..Really appreciate it :)

[TheMalady]

What an emotional poem. I can feel the feelings written in this one. Nice poem! :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you.. glad you liked it 😊

[TheMalady]

You're welcome :)

[Sage]

Well written! It's a good read :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you :)

[Rye]

Deeply touched by this write, with so much sincerity in your words.
I could feel this write, very nicely expressed.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Glad that i could touch your mind with my words.. :) Really appreciate it..
Thank you so much

[K-O-I]

I like it a lot, You kept a solid tone throughout the entire poem as well. "to tell a story to hear" dope line. "Miss being happy, crappy with you" also a good little nugget haha. Good stuff man keep it coming.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you :)