The Day I Cried

Sometimes you love some people more than they deserve..And they hurt you more than you deserve!

I don't know why,

But i just did...
And now i say it with a sigh,

Look what you did!
Maybe, It's 'cuz ..
I cared,bore,

every single tear,

my heart now aware,

of what life truly is,

of the life that i miss...
Yeah! I miss,

Miss being happy,

crappy,with you,

but all that you blew!
And now, I think of this day,

As the day that you died,

and the day that i cried! 

Every drop of tear,

from my eyes,now so dim,

to tell a story to hear,

of our fights to the brim!

Maybe it's 'cuz,

I suffocated,complicated,

what was already isolated,

and my heart is now devastated,

thinking of what life truly is,

may the future be a bliss..!
Yeah! I'm talking,

talking about you being for you 

and me being for me,

And now i think of this day,

As the day that you died,

and the day that i cried !!

Author's Note

I love playing with words..And when they mix with the strong emotions and sorrows,you really get into the mood to write something that just wants to be expressed :)

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

All the emotions were blended well and poured in this poem. Well written.

[Emily]

I love it!
Lots of emotion.
Keep it up!

[Tiffany K Charles]

Somewhere in our heart lies the blank pages of a very well bounded leather journal. And in that heart journal is where your heart cries..... You pour your emotions out and capture them with your sorrow..... well done young ,an.....

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks for your kind words .. i really appreciate it.. :)

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Very emotive and well written Edwin...Thank you for sharing
anne

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much ! :)

[Clare]

Dude! this is amazing! Bravo! Keep up these amazing poems!

[Aswin R Prasad]

I'll try :) Thanks for your review! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

All your poetry is really emotional and deep, you know what they say the best poetry comes from your heart.
So raw and moving this poem was.
I really like your stuff, Also once again your rhyming is exceptional.
Keep writing :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much ! I'm glad you liked the rhymes ;) I just love to play around with words! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love the rhymes :P
well your playing with words is creating amazing poetry keep it up.

[zunie frost]

I love the way you play with the words and give them great emotions ! Iike your work

[Aswin R Prasad]

Glad to hear that.. thank you ! :)

[zunie frost]

Welcome !!!

[Blackheart]

A touching piece, written beautifully. One suggestion though, if you don't mind, always use 'I' instead of 'i' while addressing yourself.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much.. And I'll keep that in mind! ;)

[Carolynn]

Really beautiful play on words and emotions - you really get pulled in with this - hopeful that each will find happiness again

[Aswin R Prasad]

Glad that you liked it.. thank you so mch :)

[Lluvs]

Powerful and very inspiring. I believe men still in this day in age have trouble to let themselves cry. Beautiful poem ♡

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much.. Glad that you liked it ! :)

[Lluvs]

You're welcome (: