Lies

Went a little bit rough writing this one! Nobody likes to be lied to! And definitely not me! :P

Lies..lies,they all are lies,
You f*ck me once,I f*ck you twice..
Walk away if you ain't sure,
words you say might not be true,
If it is..
Or maybe you feel it is,
I don't care!
So take the broken piece..
Shattered around,
they look so sharp..
Your heart is gonna bleed,
And my mind is gonna feed,
On your pain,
On your fear,
And it would be something you can't bear!
I'll smile seeing you suffer,
not gonna make it any easy,
it's gonna be rougher!
Yeah! I wanna see you suffer,
your such a bluffer,
Take time like a buffer,
To mend up lies like a sucker!!
Try making me believe..
I swear, I would never !
Noh! I can't forgive..
Do you still think your clever?!

Author's Note

Sorry for cursing! ;)

Reviews

[Rye]

Cruse if you wanna, It makes a point,
Never be sorry for your feelings.
This is awesome, rhymatic beat to it. enjoyed!

[Aswin R Prasad]

If i didn't , i wouldn't have put up this poem ;)
And i never do feel sorry for my feelings.. love to keep them raw ! ;)
Thank you for your review! :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

*did not didn't .. lol .. i can't even type today ;)

[Rye]

I knew what you meant :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Anyway.. thanks again for your time :)

[Tonyna]

Such a beautiful and emotional poem. Really enjoyed it!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much ! :)

[Solar]

That would make a good rap or hip-hop piece - it's got quite a staccato to it.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you! 😊

[zunie frost]

i can't believe it !!! i have never seen such a fabulous poetry with so much emotions !!! your words show me true emotions not just some creative one !!!! it really feels natural and don't worry about the language i think it's great !!!! 100 points

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much! :)

[zunie frost]

welcome !!