Fly To The Moon

Just for fun:)

Those sweet eyes, yes those eyes

 angel,

Smiling all around the universe,

Fly me to the moon

We could dance like Fred and Ginger.

Or dance in the craters ballroom

Whatever your heart desires

Fly us to the moon

I want to......to paint the town

Not in only red, but adventurous colors

Wild and carefree.....as a youthful heart would be

Yes angel, fly me to the moon

Have a fancy meal, and you could steal the spotlight,

And we'll laugh and we'll sing our song

As others stare,"what a couple of crazy kids"

Wait until we fly to the moon,

That's what we'll sing.

Take in a show, music and magic

Your smile is priceless, yes those eyes,

 fly me to the moon.

Then under the starlight 

 we could wander and wonder, 

As eyes gaze into each other

Is this that perfect moment

Where we blend together

And we fly to the moon.

Author's Note

For creative fun.

Reviews

[DCT ponderings]

Please fly me to the moon! Another great one worthy of Sinatra.

I would change the last sentence in the third stanza. Adventurous fits what you are saying. It ties right into the next line. But I am a color fiend. I play with its possibility and combinations all the time in my art. I wanted something like "Not in only red, but let's cover the full spectrum"

I'd like to see the HEX code for that. I think it may be the secret code of the universe. :')

[Shaun Payton]

Hehe I like Sinatra! Carefree and beyond. Full spectrum Hex Code hehe long i bet lol I never liked my color reference, so I'll give that some thought:) Thanks BCT:)

[DCT ponderings]

Sure thing.

[Onku Ghosh]

Good poem......written in a lighter vein.Light and carefree with not a worry in the world.

[Shaun Payton]

Thanks Onku. Some times seriousness becomes boring lol

[Onku Ghosh]

sure it does.

[Perkele.7885]

Dance me to the moon! Makes for a most memorable journey!

[Shaun Payton]

:) ty Perkele

[Sami Khalil]

"Wild and carefree.....as a youthful heart would be

Yes angel, fly me to the moon




Have a fancy meal, and you could steal the spotlight,

And we'll laugh and we'll sing our song

As others stare,"what a couple of crazy kids"

Wait until we fly to the moon,

That's what we'll sing.




Take in a show, music and magic

Your smile is priceless, yes those eyes,

fly me to the moon."
Like you have said I feel this poem is wild and free like the spirit that wrote it ...Well done...:)

[Shaun Payton]

Haha yes sir! Thanks there Sami!:)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[SyberRose]

I really enjoyed this piece...outstanding...and a fun read with a smile on my face...fly me to the moon...I like that...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

Frank Sinatra music inspired me:) I love the moon. By all means smile away:) Thank you Rose:)

[SyberRose]

Yes what would we poets do without the moon to write about ha

[Shaun Payton]

I do not know lol Probably write poems about wishing there was a moon hehe

[SyberRose]

haa

[Shaun Payton]

The Super Moon is June 23rd.

[SyberRose]

Oh okay..Ill have to look for it.

[Shaun Payton]

It should be awesome sight

[Rogue]

This is so light, airy and romantic. Wonderful imagery in the words.
May your days always be full of whimsical fancy and flight, Shaun. :)

[Shaun Payton]

I have faith one day i will, for now i wonder in a beautiful state of imagination. Thank you kindly Rogue.:)

[Stella Armour]

i love the moon it is magical ..fly away Shaun and enjoy..

[Shaun Payton]

:):):):) Thanks Stella...

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Great work. Pen on. Do u read mine writings Why and Anguish?