Travel

Travel.
One word
that has multiple meanings.
For instance,
a heal for a soul.
It can also be called
life's general goal.
For me, it's my dream
to travel around
and see places
that haven't been found.
To discover new cultures,
which differ a lot,
and meet new people
who might be friendly or not.
To walk with bare feet
along-shire the sea,
and then read a book
under blooming-cherry tree.
To hike to the top
of the mountain, where I
will breath the fresh air
while standing heaven-high.
And that's not about money,
that's all about will.
This is the idea
that makes me thrill.
So wherever I go
and whatever I see,
I'll enjoy to the full
how is that to be free.

Reviews

[Narayan Lama Aviral Yat..]

You have written quite beautifully . Since I'm also interested in travelling , I really like this poem. Though short in length, it seems to have opened a new horizon for healing the travellers' souls as you have infallibly said . The other striking feature of your poem is its rhetorical devices , especially the use of lovely rhyming word pairs like will- thrill, see-free ,etc that make your poem twinkle like the stars . It would have been much more better if you had made your language a little more figurative . Above all , I must say it is a nice poem . Now move to the next corner of your journey and start writing again . All the best.

[svarevska.anastasija]

Thank you so much, so glad to hear about that! I'll try to use more figurative language :)

[Narayan Lama Aviral Yatree]

Wow, I really expect it from your writing. Let's travel together to complete our poetic journey on this site . You are really creative and have hidden poetic talents . Set them blooming like the spring roses.