mirage of the marriage of the mind

 

so

you  stir

over these

streams  of  emotions

as i dine amidst your questions

we daresay, we relish, we traverse

a number of museum with our jaunty faces

and

since

you

&

i

are too

proverbial

of who we are ,of

what

we

are

....

let us then

take a leap

a leap for freedom

a kiss ,too, which is nearly

naked with the spatial balance of a man’s eye

an embrace in stillness; whimsically, who’ll perceive

that

 you and i

could riff the strings

either on a song for Eros

or the Ripper’s elegiac notes.

‘cause

you

 and

 i

....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pax]

i really love the format... you & i ... a concept of self and self... if i'm not mistaken... its a contants riff, leap to freedoms wings... as words fly by into your writes as the arrows pointing upin displayed emotional wonderings... this is awesome!

[seath]

thank you for having a reading of this verse of mine

[Belle]

I have read this many times and 'was trying to give what I thought about the content but the ego is holding my fingers not to do so. Classmate, this poem brought my Id and ego on battle. I hate.

[seath]

then you should rely on your superego my dear friend... though what we covet is not in congruence with what we ought to do,,,still.....