Love Is Like A Rose

Love is like a rose,

Beautiful and majestic.

But as everyone knows,

It started out as a tiny seed.

This seed, like friendship,

Must be planted in the soft , fertile soil,

If it wants any chance at kinship.

 

Now we must nurture it to make it grow,

Watering and feeding it.

All of you care into it, must flow,

Pruning and shaping it.

 

However, you must be careful,

And protect it from weeds and such things.

For they are the bull

To the fighter,

Always threatening to extinguish it.

 

If you have followed these steps,

Into a flower it will bloom,

Beautiful and majestic.

Author's Note

ignore spelling and grammar problems. any suggestions would be much appreciated.

Reviews

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

good poem
but u forgot the part about how much pain love can bring

[Lyrical Love]

Enjoyed! It feels like you are speaking from that shoulda, coulda, woulda thing...
of what you should have done to keep a lost love.
Thought provoking...

[Alexander Fox]

It was good. Could have been a bit longer, and I couldnt tell if it was meant to have metor or not.....but still good. Keep goin bro.