As Flame Turns To Ash
A Poem by
Aspiring Angel
Written for my daughter Kimberly, who is now a single Mommy, but still has ties to break.
Within the flames of what
Are my yesterdays
I search for the answers
To what is to be my life
I am the same
As I have always been
And yet ...
I am so different
I never dreamed I could
So completely love
When I see Joseph's face before me
I am told that the sparkle
Returns to my eyes
He is my world
He is my sunshine
So caught up am I
In the
What should I do's
Answers drifting within my heart
And yet ...
They still cannot be plainly seen
I no longer know if I love
The hurt is getting to where
I can no longer feel the pain
In these moments of
Quiet reflection
I watch the flames
As they turn to ash
I hear whispers of a better
Life for myself and for Joseph
But still too ...
Is the one to be left behind
If you are to run across this
one day my Kimberly,
please know I understand
the confusion you are going
through right now.
I love you,
Mom
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As Flame Turns To Ash
© 2009 Aspiring Angel
Author's Note
Kimberly still has a long road but is making progress. She is very sweet, tries hard, and she is my heart.
Reviews
amazing presentation of a poem I must say and great poem too!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
amazing i liked it
Posted 14 Years Ago
amazing i liked it
My daughter is now just entering the 16+ years. I am holding my breath and praying for the best. I love the work here and even more the purpose and intent of it. Good Work.
Posted 14 Years Ago
My daughter is now just entering the 16+ years. I am holding my breath and praying for the best. I love the work here and even more the purpose and intent of it. Good Work.
I hope this has helped her and inspired her along her path. I like it. I really love the title you chose for this as well. Kudos.
Posted 15 Years Ago
I hope this has helped her and inspired her along her path. I like it. I really love the title you chose for this as well. Kudos.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
She will get older and things will be clearer...they are for us all. Beautiful piece. Rain..
Posted 15 Years Ago
She will get older and things will be clearer...they are for us all. Beautiful piece. Rain..
*hug* Well done. -
Posted 15 Years Ago
*hug* Well done. -
Very nice, thank you for sharing.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Very nice, thank you for sharing.
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Added on January 13, 2009
Last Updated on January 15, 2009
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Aspiring Angel Reno, NV
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