The Women In My Mirror

 

The Women In My Mirror She finds herself living within circles That never quite seem to close   Repeated circles placed as when She was a child and penmanship Was practiced by using circles that Never quite connected   Page after page... Of overlapping circles     Knowing that she has enabled the cause And yet.... Still feeling within her heart that she Could have not done differently   Doing and doing.... To wonder if what she is doing Is even seen at all     Days meet nights and nights meets days And the circle to tomorrow starts over Yet once again   One side of broken reflection to Go on to face the new day The other side praying not to loose The person she has always been   Page after page Of overlapping circles....       Aspiring Angel   Audio Girl In The Mirror

Reviews

[cecil]

Hello it has been sometime since i have read you probably a couple of years,,your words still spread wonder and wisdom for all who read,,this is indeed a beautiful and talented write,,I look forward to reading more of your words,,,blessings..cecil

[MagiCrystal]

Looooooooooooooooooooooove it... teach me how do you do your music.. pls.. 100 % Magic..

[poetic soul]

this poem jus would make me say: WOW!

its beautiful...... thanks for sharing! :) keep penning.. keep rocking...

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Kiara]

poetically beautiful!
one favor please
always keep writing!
-arabella :)

[closed account]

This was beautiful... simply beautiful.. how do you get your page to look like that?
I love it.......

SB

[J.Black]

"Days meet nights and nights meets days
And the circle to tomorrow starts over
Yet once again"

This was well written! Tons of description, over all wonderful!

[Blue Sky]

A very intircate view of the self
as the woman would hold herself
as very nicely worded in the end

One side of broken reflection to
Go on to face the new day
The other side praying not to loose
The person she has always been

beautiful like your all others~

[alyssa]

soooo good!!! Again ii love your discriptiveness!! ypu are a really good writer and you should keep writing!!!]
hugs
alyssa
p.s. thanks for the reveiw

[Rain]

What is the font you use? I love it. It's a great piece. Rain..