Stepping Beyond The Picture

Written for my daughter Kimberly from a Mother's heart that wishes more for her life and my grandson's

Every now and then I will bring to you Another face another image Frozen in time . . . October 16, 2007 Aspiring Angel Stepping Beyond The Picture In actuality the young woman You see here within this picture Is one of my daughter's Closest friends The photographer That captured this shot Is not only very talented But is also a friend To the model of this portrait All rights to this very unique vision Belongs exclusively to themselves I thank you both for its use here November 10, 2007 Reno, Nevada USA To step within . . . To step beyond Open eyes . . . Tearful song . . . Held just beneath the vision clear Unveil the spirit that lingers near So close the dream . . . And yet so far Visions that rests upon distant stars Held birth to dreams Within the sleepless hours Night becomes another day . . . Day remains to become the same Hold to dreams Just beneath the veil So far . . . So close . . . To tell the tale Angel's face unlined by years Held heart Within the gripping fears Take haste Before your youth is gone . . . Break free this web to 'Step Beyond' To Be Continued . . . . Written For my daughter Kimberly Stepping Beyond The Picture Part Four

Author's Note

My daughter and her friend could almost pass as twins.

Reviews

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Ahhh yes the stepping beyond pics. These I especially
enjoyed. When you originally posted this one the "OTHER"
site I really dont remember what my take was on this pic
but as I look at this today it reminds me very much of where
I would like to be... Mostly hidden... I feel I am just a partial
vision of what once was. I see it as my future very obsecure
not a clear vision. Oh crap !!! Now where did all that
negativity come from??? LOL

Sweetie these have always been so special to me....
Wonderful job as always

Hugs and Love U Bunches
D

[alyssa]

VER VERY GOOD!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK I BET YOUR DAUGHTER IS SOO PROUD TO HAVE YOU AS A MOM!!!

[Rain]

And you say "I'm not a poet." You are so wrong. You make people feel with your words, which is precisely what a poet does.
Very touching. Rain..

[An Open Venue]

very well done! strong use of rhyme and rhythm, alliteration and repetition all combined by a crafted pen to convey a strong message.

Excellent Penning

Ven

[Blue Sky]

So beautifully worded
filled with such love and endearment!
Always, amazed at your talent!
You shared with us another
wonderful piece as your heart offers beauty!

~~hugs~~

[Samuel Dickens]

Very lovely and moving. Nice job as always, Aspiring Angel.

[darkgurl]

This is written so loving very well written my friend......Kim