Far Away Places

Written at a low moment

Far Away Places Sing to me sweet music Of far away places And new visions awaiting To be seen I find myself To be comforted by the night The blanket it affords me Erasing the chill of the day Awaiting now the voice That beckons to the part of me That can no longer be denied Too great the pain for words To find their way To a posting page The music behind blank screen My only refuge for a soul whom remains searching To find its way to sweet release The promise kept as tension melts And places far away Begins to find their voice Sweet music take me To where time is my own Bring back the part of me That has become missing But shall never remain lost Sing me away to where today Will finally lay To become yesterday As I enter into my tomorrow When the words cannot be placed I know it is again time To search for the person Whom I have always been Written words so much a part To no longer be a part I live for now Just a little frazzled In my today Reminding myself in confidence That I always seem to find my way Within my tomorrow's The way perhaps long But the rewards Of time now traveled Another chapter written Within my journey Knowing that what is the now Is but just a bridge To what will be Of my own making The steps that waits ahead Yet to be taken The journey ever continuing To find my way to tomorrow Finally there I pray to have learned well My lessons within today Far away places standing in hope and promise Just before me now Peace be with you Lesa aka Aspiring Angel

Reviews

[Rain]

I loved this piece. It is sad in many ways, The passing of time. But, you endure with grace. I understand so much of this piece. Rain..

[Samuel Dickens]

I think most of us would like to return to some past period of our lives. Maybe to do something different that would change today, or perhaps to taste love when it was new. I admit my mind spends a good deal of time there. Your words are introspective and gentle as always.

[Kiddx]

This is so wonderful as well as sincere very well written, i like this.

[Michael X]

Lesa, this is libertaing, romantic, classically invented, mysterious
you have a beautiful way with music and wording, and form
I love the way you brought it all together, thanks for sharing your talent.

[Ray Hamilton]

This is wonderful to read, I like the music too
Well penned as always
Your friend Ray