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Who Is To Hold The Dream

Who Is To Hold The Dream

A Poem by Aspiring Angel

Who Is To Hold The Dream



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Who
Is To Hold The Dream






Once upon a time in the today
Where reality had found
A mournful song to play
Entered to dream
This heart grown weary

Now ...
Just beyond the shadows leary .....

She finds herself in a distant land
Transported as a single
Grain of sand

She floats upon a wind
She cannot feel
Within a dream that seems
So very real



Well hello there Mr Dragon
Whom just might you be

Are you truly part of
What is reality
Or a symbol of diminsion
Awaiting somehow to be seen

Is it I that sees you
Or ...
You that gazes upon me

Which of us
Is to hold the dream



You know what
You don't scare me

My dragon's rage much larger
In the life that I lead




Here you rest upon my arm
Not frigtening at all
Holding somewhat of a
Dashing charm





Really big  

Really bad

Hmmmmmmmm . . . .

Her dragon's in the life she'd led?





Now we must leave
This dream allowed to play
Rememberances  of
Remains of what is her today



Awaken princess to new vow
To claim the dream
That is the now



This dream a call to arms
Of dragons waiting to be slain?

I wish you luck to put to rest
The dragons
Of your yesterday


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You are an endless origin of beauty. Rain..

Posted 15 Years Ago


How funny that for some reason I am
drawn back to this again today
after (hopefully) I have slayed one of
my lifes dragaons this morning. My
Precious Savior does lead me where
I need to go and ALWAYS I find my dear
friend waiting there for me ... Helping
me gather up the shattered pieces of my life.
You know the bag is getting pretty full. Ahhh
one day when we are too old to do anything else
maybe we will try to piece them back together... NOT!!!
LOL
I Love You Girlie Girl
Big Hugs
D

Posted 16 Years Ago


this was indeed a great poem and we all have our lil dragons to put to rest now don't we.

great job.

l8r g8r
-DeAn

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I am in love with this piece. The visual and the music added flowing blood to it. Every line felt spoken loudly. Are any of your other poems visually like this? Thanks for sharing the creativity with the readers. This how you end the night with a creative buzz.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sweetie this is just a beautiful as the first time I read it
Dragons of yesterday... Oh I fear they will never rest.
Wonderful job my friend
Hugs
D

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

WOW! This is amazing, I can feel the emotion put into it and the magic that brought it to view, this is a wonderful write here, Most enjoyable read...Kim

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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