Who Is To Hold The DreamA Poem by Aspiring Angel
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How funny that for some reason I am
drawn back to this again today after (hopefully) I have slayed one of my lifes dragaons this morning. My Precious Savior does lead me where I need to go and ALWAYS I find my dear friend waiting there for me ... Helping me gather up the shattered pieces of my life. You know the bag is getting pretty full. Ahhh one day when we are too old to do anything else maybe we will try to piece them back together... NOT!!! LOL I Love You Girlie Girl Big Hugs D Posted 16 Years Ago |
this was indeed a great poem and we all have our lil dragons to put to rest now don't we.
great job. l8r g8r -DeAn Posted 16 Years Ago2 of 2 people found this review constructive. |
I am in love with this piece. The visual and the music added flowing blood to it. Every line felt spoken loudly. Are any of your other poems visually like this? Thanks for sharing the creativity with the readers. This how you end the night with a creative buzz.
Posted 16 Years Ago2 of 2 people found this review constructive. |
Sweetie this is just a beautiful as the first time I read it
Dragons of yesterday... Oh I fear they will never rest. Wonderful job my friend Hugs D Posted 16 Years Ago2 of 2 people found this review constructive. |
WOW! This is amazing, I can feel the emotion put into it and the magic that brought it to view, this is a wonderful write here, Most enjoyable read...Kim
Posted 16 Years Ago2 of 2 people found this review constructive. |
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Added on October 7, 2008
6 Reviews
Added on October 7, 2008
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Aspiring Angel
Reno, NV
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