As a guitar player..I can appreciate this one very much. Very well done with rythem and rhyme.
You ended it very well as described by guitar girl below. There is much sorrow behind a guitar......
WOW! Such emotion and raw energy put into this, I love this write alot,
"Picking up guitar
Within withered hands
The man strums melodies
Of distant dreams"
I just adore these lines right here you do have an amazing talent....Kim
I am so glad
That you have dropped in
To meet a new face
And experience a new heart
Come along with me as
Aspiring Angel speaks to
Me in whispers that brings
Her thoughts to live.. more..