A Tale Of HalloweenA Poem by Aspiring Angel
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Yikes. lol
I like the variety. You need to be able to create emotions of all kinds. I liked this,alot. Rain.. Posted 16 Years Ago |
Well composed with perfect rhyme and meter. Holds the readers attention throughout.
Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
Breathtaking and haunting, I love it. the way it plays out in three dramatic stages,
the narrative, the explaination, and the ghost, the music, graphic, wording, color, form, passion, thought put into the ambience swept me away, truly beautifully transpiring and heart touching, a spooky feast for the senses, I'm still taken. Posted 16 Years Ago |
Oh Sweetie I sit here with goose bumps as I once again visit
the Birth of the book What is now my world. This takes me back to a different time and Place. A place that now haunts us both... I guess it always will... So so much left behind, but it opened an new door for us both. Not the same but not as risky either.... Sweetie this was just so awesome I loved it the first time I read it and I loved it rereading it tonite. Hugs and Love KKD Posted 16 Years Ago |
this is anouther great story i really like it thanks for sharing it and you no me gf im glad its fall heat go away love ya KKd
Posted 16 Years Ago |
This is a great write, you write dark well
I dread seeing the leaves turning and the cold winter on its way I told my sister summer was officially over, I put socks on LOL I enjoyed this write Ray Posted 16 Years Ago |
Awesome prose angel; amazing talent.
Love the graphics too. You Rule! Thanks! Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
Beautiful, absolutly beautiiful. haunting, powerul, well thought out, a perfect rhyme scheem. I couldn't have thought of a better way to tell a tale of holloween.
Macabre in all the right sense. magical! Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
That is really good. It reminds me of Wuthering Heights, the dark drama. I love the way you posted it it too. How do you do that? It all goes so well together. A cracking All Hallow's Evening tale......
Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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Aspiring Angel
Reno, NV
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