What Is Now My World Part SevenA Chapter by Aspiring Angel |
From this point the story takes some drastic turns. I hope you will continue as Alona and Anthony continues on their journey. Thanks everyone.
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Lesa, you really know how to draw the read into the emotions of these two characters. Love, finds us in all the most unexplained places. I really like the way you write. Its fresh, its clean, as your words paint the image
like we would see on the big screen. There are several lines throughout these other chapters I have not commented. They are wonderful. I had to again keep reading through this to the end. Well done! Lesa P.S wonderfully presented from a heart of warmth and love. Art Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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Lesa, you really know how to draw the read into the emotions of these two characters. Love, finds us in all the most unexplained places. I really like the way you write. Its fresh, its clean, as your words paint the image
like we would see on the big screen. There are several lines throughout these other chapters I have not commented. They are wonderful. I had to again keep reading through this to the end. Well done! Lesa P.S wonderfully presented from a heart of warmth and love. Art Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
And the story continues.... Romance on a boat must be great.
Posted 16 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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