Give Me A Ride?
A Poem by
Aspiring Angel
© 2008 Aspiring Angel
Reviews
This is so beautiful and tender. I love the picture you have posted with this poem. Great work. Chanti
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Talk about cute and a nice ride back into childhood!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Talk about cute and a nice ride back into childhood!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This reminds me of a childhood memory, you did a great descrptive account with this, sounds as though you had a great childhood. Nice job with this piece, I enjoyed the ride and the photo.
Tony
Posted 15 Years Ago
This reminds me of a childhood memory, you did a great descrptive account with this, sounds as though you had a great childhood. Nice job with this piece, I enjoyed the ride and the photo.
Tony
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Lesa, the picture and the poem are priceless, reminds me of myself growing up on the farm and my first horse. Well done.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Lesa, the picture and the poem are priceless, reminds me of myself growing up on the farm and my first horse. Well done.
This is such an enjoyable and refreshing read.. You brought every scene to life, I felt I was there with Mr Horse wondering if I would get a ride.
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is such an enjoyable and refreshing read.. You brought every scene to life, I felt I was there with Mr Horse wondering if I would get a ride.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
That's very cute. The little guy reminds me of me when I was little. I always wanted to go bye-bye in any mode of transportation I could find--and down to the creek? Boy, that was right down my alley!
Posted 16 Years Ago
That's very cute. The little guy reminds me of me when I was little. I always wanted to go bye-bye in any mode of transportation I could find--and down to the creek? Boy, that was right down my alley!
Quite the little cowboy
This is cute I enjoyed it very much
Well penned
Ray
Posted 16 Years Ago
Quite the little cowboy
This is cute I enjoyed it very much
Well penned
Ray
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Added on September 19, 2008
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Aspiring Angel Reno, NV
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I am so glad
That you have dropped in
To meet a new face
And experience a new heart
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Aspiring Angel speaks to
Me in whispers that brings
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