What Is Now My World ~ One

What Is Now My World ~ One

A Chapter by Aspiring Angel

 

What Is Now My World One

 

 

 

  

What Is Now My World
Part One


I was first pictured to the reader,
To be within a forgotten
Graveyard on a Hallow's Eve.

Murdered by the hands of the wife
I had only found to be a part of my real
And whose face I had never seen
Even as she took my life.

Destined to relive my death, over and
Over in a Hell, that I sometimes wonder
Is any worse than the reality,
It affords me to escape.
Through the imagination, of written word
I seek to be more than the ghostly image
You have thus far seen.

Why...?

Why do I find myself within a graveyard
Of forgotten stones for all eternity?
Maybe through the whisperings
Of Aspiring's pen,I will one day
Understand it all myself.



Perhaps our journey will go far.
Or perhaps I will be here
for only a short moment in time.

My story being told
in only a few chapters,
Given within the quiet of the night
to the pen of the writer
that now gives me my life.

While we are perhapsing.

Perhaps . . .

This story will not end
as it was first imagined
and will take on an entirely
new life of its own.

Leaving to the writer the challenge
Of finding my story's ending.

However, this story will find its way
To completion. I will eventually disappear.
To become only a title
within a maze of titles
Upon a poet's page.

Wherein characters once so vividly real
Will again lose identity
to the conscious mind.
Being left by chance to be found
Only by those who are drawn to find us.

How long will I appear before you?
Aspiring has not yet whispered
The story to be told.

And so,we begin.



To Be Continued...
Audio Silk Rose ~ Kitaro


 



© 2008 Aspiring Angel


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okay....I can't wait to read the next chapters..and will do when I get a bit of time..
Great beginning...you have me hooked!
Steve

Posted 16 Years Ago


There are so many aspects to this story, I would not have room to write them all,
I'm such a paranormal fan that this comes across as automatic writing in concept
and full intriguing as well as ghostly, and ghosts are my all time favorite subject,
so this Awsome to me, you did an amazing job at transforming into character,
i can't wait to read the next chapter, and to see how it all unfolds.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Mysterious, haunting and beautiful. I love the music, and think it adds a great deal of beauty and atmosphere to the story.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lesa you amaze me in the artistry and craft you share with all of us...This was superb!. Well done. A Great Beginning.

Art

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aspiring Angel
Aspiring Angel

Reno, NV



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I am so glad That you have dropped in To meet a new face And experience a new heart Come along with me as Aspiring Angel speaks to Me in whispers that brings Her thoughts to live.. more..

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