One

One

A Poem by Plitman_728

it seems, from time to time, as you move your inquiring fingers across my skin, tracing the line of your descent,

that i cease to be a solid being.

i can no longer distinguish the barrier between my skin and your fingertips,

can no longer identify the point where my body ends and yours begins.

i feel myself dissolve, slow and warm, into the very cells of you.

an osmosis of us,

making concrete the words that never seem enough.

"i love you, i love you, i love you."

and two become one.

i open your eyes, and the world is new...

© 2011 Plitman_728


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Plitman_728
The photography is also my work.

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This is fantastic! You have managed to describe love so well that it seems to give me a new understanding of it. Wonderful poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Plitman_728
Plitman_728

Pearland, TX



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I'm young, restless, and passionate about discovery. I'm an aspiring poet, photographer, and chocolatier. I love rainy days, mittens, holding hands, the smell of warm cookies, making food with people .. more..

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