Paralyzed Senyru (?)

Paralyzed Senyru (?)

A Poem by Giggling Star
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What is this? A Senyru or Haiku ...

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Sensing danger near

Quarry unable to move

Paralyzed by love

© 2014 Giggling Star


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This is wonderful. Conveys emotion well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It'd be considered a Senryu, Haiku has to do with nature. Nice emotion packed into this one giggles.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda ... I was hoping I would hear from you on this one! Can always count on you to com.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Welcome, it's a great Senryu, you really punched it up, it's hard to get that much emotion out of so.. read more

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Added on February 27, 2014
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Giggling Star
Giggling Star

Naples, FL



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I am a happy, optimistic person. My favorite thing in life is laughing. Nothing makes me feel more loved that to be gently teased ... and I like to tease you back. In the end ... I hope I die laugh.. more..

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