OF TWO MINDS

Told from a woman's point of view ... and don't argue with me!

OF TWO MINDS

 

From a time long ago

In those first early days

The man and the woman

Learned two different ways

 

I natter along

Every thought plain

You grunt back your answers

With apparent disdain

 

Man’s mind is a mystery

A woman’s quite clear

“What the heck is he thinking?

“What did I just hear?”

 

The mind of a woman

The mind of a man

In constant conflict

We can’t understand

Reviews

[unpublished]

Wow I love that last verse. This is so true. Very good.

[Giggling Star]

Thanks for the review! I find it amazing that we haven't evolved, after all this time, to have a little better understanding of each other ;-)

[MsJewel]

Very true my friend...mars and venus and all that stuff...

:) Julie

[Giggling Star]

Try to imagine a world where we do understand each other ... kind of a scary thought! Thanks!

[stars are far]

so true.. well done xxd......

[Giggling Star]

Thank you so much!

[stars are far]

my pleasure :)

[Tina Louise UK]

ha...too true...enjoyed :) x

[Giggling Star]

Thanks Tia ... the unsolvable mysteries of life ... what is death like? and can't men just think like us - the RIGHT way!!! LOL

[RichGee]

Great work...very accurate write and reads rhythmically well...love it.

[Giggling Star]

Rich, you always have such kind words for me! One of these times you'll find something to criticize and I will be crushed ;-)

[RichGee]

NEVER! You write too splendidly for that ever to happen.

[Giggling Star]

I think you may be a little bit of a sweet talker!!

[RichGee]

I am by no means a professional, so my criticism would be of little substance...
I only comment on what I enjoy...be it the context, style, how I relate to the piece or it's humor or wit...All your writing thus far has been enjoyable...

[Giggling Star]

Thank you so much. You're very kind!

[RichGee]

My pleasure.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Spot on the subject , men and women always differ..................great write

[Giggling Star]

Thanks for your review - from the responses I've had - this is a universal issue! Isn't it interesting that throughout the history of mankind we have never found the secret to the differences LOL

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

The difference creates love and that's the real taste.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Perhaps that's why we are called women and they are men...because we're really different in some aspects. Haha!

But notice that even we are different in the way of thinking, still we meet halfway...when it comes to emotion. And that's why a man needs a woman, and the woman needs a man.

Life is really full of mysteries...

Well-done, Star!

[Giggling Star]

Thanks Dhaye! It's when we don't meet halfway that the problems pop up!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ah, problems...they are only spices in a relationship. For me, it's exciting when "you get mad to me now, then court me again later". LOL. When you really knew each other, problems last for some moments only...not for hours...nor days.

You're welcome, Star. Best wishes! =)

[TL Boehm]

I natter along
Every thought plain
You grunt back your answers
With apparent disdain

That's exactly how many of my convos with the dear hub go - almost every evening.

[Giggling Star]

ah yes ... I think it's universal LOL :-) Thanks for stopping by!

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes of course I like this one. Men/Women -- we are different, that is for damned sure.

[Giggling Star]

Always have been ... always will be. One of life's great mysteries.