My Words

My words will be like the softest gloves

Stroking and soothing until you let go

Gently pushing and pulling

Kneading softly on your bruised emotions

Until you cannot feel their pain anymore

 

And when you are relaxed

In a state of utter contentment

I will reach out and take your hand

Slowly turning your face to mine

And you will come alive again

Reviews

[Darkgirl]

This feels to me like a moment of sweetness, well done

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

holy awesomeness. I love the ending :D

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Thank you so much Lucy Morningstar - love the name.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

thanks!! :)

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[Ahena MK]

Good work ... Ahena :) keep crafting

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Thank you so much

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:) .....................

[Frieda P]

Ah those sweet healing words, such a tender poem stargazer. Nicely pen'd.

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Thank you Frieda - a very nice compliment. I appreciate your review.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I really enjoyed. :-)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Gorgeous, touching and awe-inspiring. I enjoyed this very much.

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Awe-inspiring - that's a first for me! Thank you so much!

[Dhaye]

This is very touching for me, stargazer. Thanks to Scott for directing me into this beautiful piece.

Your words here...they're all what I always say.

HIS words make me strong. They heal. They make me calm like pure raindrops touching my skin. They wash my soul.

I wish I can hear those healing words again...

[Giggling Star]

You never know what will happen, Dhaye. Every moment can bring something completely unexpected. I know what that longing feels like. God bless you and watch over you

[Dhaye]

Hey, seems like a miracle just happened after reading this piece. I've got a healing message from that person.
Thanks and God bless you, too.

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How wonderful! I'm happy for you!

[Gloria]

"My Words" simply amazing I love to read you poems they are beautiful and wonderfully written.~

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Why thank you so much. What a nice review

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful write...Thank you for sharing...:)..............

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Thank for stopping by :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Special thanks to Scott Metro for requesting that I read this poem because it is splendid!
I love the thoughts that this evokes as I read it.
It is short, but so full of emotions.
what a lovely read!
Thanks for posting this poem and sharing it.

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Thanks to you for your kind review and solved a riddle for me. Thanks to Scott for sending out a request on my behalf. I wondered why I was getting reviews :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

LOL, what a surprise! You are welcome. :)

[Lexi Jackson]

Really lovely poem,
"My words will be the digest gloves"
Absolutely brilliant metaphoric language :)

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Thank for the wonderful review

[Lexi Jackson]

No problem, I thoroughly enjoyed it