My Words

My Words

A Poem by Giggling Star

My words will be like the softest gloves

Stroking and soothing until you let go

Gently pushing and pulling

Kneading softly on your bruised emotions

Until you cannot feel their pain anymore

 

And when you are relaxed

In a state of utter contentment

I will reach out and take your hand

Slowly turning your face to mine

And you will come alive again

© 2014 Giggling Star


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I don't know why but for some reason, this reminds me of Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark in Mockingjay, like the only one he and she needs is one another and everything will be alright again despite all the bad things happening around them.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very comforting. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

It's my pleasure ... thank you for stopping by ;)
This made me all warm haha. Thanks for the words. That soothe the soul

Posted 10 Years Ago


Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

Exactly what is was supposed to do - I SCORE!!! :)
Words can truly heal. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

Thanks Brittany - do you write also, or just like to read and review?
Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

I write. I've been writing poetry for a very long time.
Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

I'll be sure to stop by your page. Nice to meet you!
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Bri
So beautiful and I love it. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

Thank you Bri. I appreciate that.
A lovely poem. The sentiment of powerful words taking you far and then bringing you back. It's how it struck me. Thanks.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

Sue, thanks for that nice review!
Bless those people with words you describe, words can definitely heal, but words can injure one permanently to the last breath they take too, very relevant to this time period

Posted 10 Years Ago


Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review.
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You most welcome
Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

:) ...................
All I want are the healing words...

This is superb. I love each line.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Are you in need of healing words?
What a touching poem. Nicely written. :)

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your welcome. :)
Giggling Star

10 Years Ago

:) .........................
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

:).......................................... :)

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Giggling Star
Giggling Star

Naples, FL



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I am a happy, optimistic person. My favorite thing in life is laughing. Nothing makes me feel more loved that to be gently teased ... and I like to tease you back. In the end ... I hope I die laugh.. more..

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