Charmed

We love to entice you, beguile you and tease

We practice our power on grand-daddy's knees

We learn this quite early, before we can talk

We're pretty effective by the time we can walk

 

When we are honed in on finding our mate

Our senses are tuned to a fine razor state

We want you to think, you are one of the few

Oh silly man, you won't know what hit you

 

We like you to think that you're in the lead

But we secretly know that it's all our own deed

We know what you want and that's where you're led

We pretend we don't know, it's to get us in bed

 

It's part of our history and passed right along

From female to female and that keeps us strong

We know what men think of from dusk until light

Its sex and sex only, from morning til night

 

So when you start thinking that you're just the best

Before you start strutting and beat on your chest

I have a secret to tell - don't be alarmed

You better remember you've just been charmed

Reviews

[MsJewel]

This is delightful and so true! Going in my library!

:) Julie

[Giggling Star]

Thank you Julie ... ;-D

[Demii]

I loved this it almost made me laugh when I read this line "It's part of our history and passed right along
From female to female and that keeps us strong
We know what men think of from dusk until light
Its sex and sex only, from morning til night
good job, I enjoyed it :)

[Giggling Star]

Thanks for visiting my page and for the review. Glad I was able to make you smile. Interesting ... this is the stanza most females key in on!

[RichGee]

Very delightful! Truer words have not been spoken!
Women have the power to charm us into war! Love your art!

[Giggling Star]

Thank you so much Rich!

[RichGee]

My pleasure.

[Eric Pudalov]

Very funny (and definitely true) poem! I've been "charmed" more times than I can count. I'm happy to say I've found a woman who can charm me all the time now (and who likes to be charmed as well).

[Giggling Star]

How lucky for you both!! I don't think there's anything in the world more fun than flirting with your loved one - to me that's being charmed (and I love it!!!!)

[Eric Pudalov]

Ha, me too! Flirting didn't come naturally to me, but it's been a fun process to learn. That'd be a fun poem to come up with (learning how to flirt, something like that). Thanks for the idea...I bet you didn't even know you'd inspired me!!

[Trace]

Cute and clever and oh so true
when a woman turns on her charms
Yet men still know just what to do
When we snuggle you in our arms

Trace

[Giggling Star]

Lovely ... I should add that to the end :) ... there's nothing like being snuggled in a lover's arms. You've shown me the errors of my way? Thanks Trace!

[David Scott]

Charm away! Ha. I like your sense of humor.
Very fun to read laughing luminescence.

[Giggling Star]

Thank you Mr. Scott! I love the alternate names you're inventing! You are so very clever (feeling charmed?)

[ANM]

Ha ha utterly brilliant never mind all the blah about syntax, punctuation etc this is a great poem well written and unfortunately true... to a point.. us men know what you do!

[Giggling Star]

You only think you do! LOL

[ANM]

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[A Jackson]

You were right, this is a great poem and the rhythm is excellent. I like your style and will definitely keep checking back for more!

[Giggling Star]

Thanks for the read/review! I'll be visiting your page later today. ;-D

[Lyn Anderson]

a charming piece - the power of woman, you say it so well.

[Giggling Star]

Thank you for taking the time to review it!

[B.J]

Ha I agree it is brilliant I just love the finish summed it all

[Giggling Star]

I don't think men find it all that amusing!

[B.J]

Maybe not but I enjoyed your work