The World is a Beautiful Place

A world is a beautiful place

Natures green so dont be mean

Treat the world with care

Treat the animals with love

 

Birds chirping everyday

Water flowing in the creek

Why kill life?

Why not save it?

 

Kids are playing at the playground

babies being born

Don't pollute the earth

Don't let Earth die

 

We can make a change

Recycle and clean

A world is a beautiful place

 

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

I found this had elements of goodness beyond 95% of most poems I've read in the past month.

Well done!

[Tate Morgan]

My favorite subject children.They are so unlike adults they tell you all they know and then stop

[Tom]

Very beautiful and it relays a message everyone should take heed of :3

[Jupiter Jazz]

Nice message =)

[Dove]

I really like this poem and i totally agree with the message. This piece tells us about our beautiful world and what we should do to take care of it. It also shows that we dont always do what we should. Amazing job. Keep up the good work.

[Jazique]

Nice simple poem we should all do in no matter how we put the message is always same protector the earth. Well done with the poem describing our beautiful earth and what we should do for it.

[Raven Starhawk]

Your message here is one that should be stamped in history. It has such a positive affect on this reader and hopefully will be appreciated by others as well.