IT TAKES TIME!

not that easy though ...

It takes time
to get over the memories,
It takes time
to make the mind stable,
For death of a dear one
isn't so easy,
It takes time
to hide those tears,
for memories flash back
time over time,
It takes time
to make new connection!
For forgetting someone,
isn't so easy,
it takes time
to accept the harsh truth,
the heart wails for long,
for it wants what it wants,
it takes time
to make it understand,
whats gone is gone
for now and forever!

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I really liked it..You expressed feelings very beautifully..Thanks for sharing and great work...

[Amber Lily]

Your words couldn't speak more truth, everyone deals with loss differently. And only you can decide if and when you are going to be okay. This one is written in very small and short lines, which I think fits well with the theme. That is because you are often left speechless when a loved one is lost, and if you do speak, it isn't much. Great work :)

[My Favorite Writer !]

My personal favorite are last four lines,
"it takes time
to make it understand,
whats gone is gone
for now and forever!"

its deep and moving..It's always sad to loose someone without whom you can't even live for a second..its heartbreaking but a bitter truth.

Keep writing!
-MFW

[gentlekindness]

Very beautiful. Nice writing. The sorrow of death touches all humans.
Annie

[annalysiar]

This poem is raw and emotional.
you draw in your readers that way. I love your honest style. One can see where it needs work but this poem feels so complete like a portal into you

[Cyndy Robinson]

it does take time, and it doesn't seem to matter what we do to try to speed that time up to heal ourselves, grief plods along at its own pace. So sorry for your loss. A good read!

[Raahi]

You have expressed your feelings in the best possible way. your pen has a way of giving that feel.
yes its difficult but with time we learn to just make peace with everything available. its the way of life and we have to accept it sooner or later. keep writing, your words have magic in them..
my best wishes

[Celie Rose]

I enjoyed your poem. Indeed, it takes time. Feelings are well expressed. "to accept the harsh truth," it takes time to make it understand," The heart does want what is wants and can be treacherous.. But, when we reach the point of acceptance, the real healing of the heart begins. The memory of a loved one will always be there. It is a part of you forever, a cherished memory. Good job. Keep writing

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes I agree it really takes time to heal the wound. You have expressed the feelings very well :)

[Neha Sharma]

It is so true. But time is the only healer. It is a beautiful piece. Good work! Keep writing. :)