She said!

thats why I say its better to be secretive!

She said she loved the rain
So he made her drench herself in tears.

She said she loved the sea
So he had her drowning in her fears.

She said she loved to fly
So he took the ground away beneath her feet.

She said she loved to dance
So he mesmerized her to his beats.

She said she loved heights
So he never caught her when she fell.

She said she loved the stars
So he had her hopelessly gazing at them through nights of hell.

She said she loved laughter
So he reserved it by locking it.

She said she loved the sun setting
So he set her beaming light within.

She said she loved to make memories
So he gave her unforgettable scars.

She said she loved to travel
So he coldly pushed her afar.

She said she loved Autumn
So he changed colors before her eyes .

She said she loved god
So he had her begging him to help her survive.

Reviews

[gentlekindness]

Wow, this is amazing. A perfect description of a narcissist and his victim. Pathological narcissism is evil. They turn the world of the victim dark. They make everything about worshipping them and make the victim cater to all of their needs, while the narcissist (or psychopath) feeds off of your blood and life force, leaving you as a rotting shell.
Blessings,
Annie

[Coyote Poetry]

I truly loved this poem. Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending.
"She said she loved Autumn
So he changed colors before her eyes .

She said she loved god
So he had her begging him to help her survive."
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[annalysiar]

Wow of all the ways to portray this... Beautifully done. Great verbiage, beautiful imagery... Very good write, nicely done.

[Asra Hakak]

Tysm ... this means a lot :)

[annalysiar]

No you are welcome. I am honored to read and review for you, Asra. Thank you for sharing 😃